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Post by tater06 on Jul 22, 2009 22:52:42 GMT -5
I was just looking at Jas' gallery on Deviantart, looking through all her pictures, 'cause all her pictures are perfect and the 3/4 ones give me the fuzzies, and I remembered that I had always wanted to write a fic that went with her pictures with F.U.T.U.R.E Wally. You know, the ones where he has an eyepatch? I always that that would be an AWESOME fic. Wally, hidin' out in the middle of nowhere to stay away from Madame Margeret...Then suddenly, when he's outside, he spots a girl coming his way, and he gets out his weapon.
Wally: Come no further! You ain't girlifying me, female.... Go back straight where you came from!
Kuki: *gasps* Wally, is that really you?
Wally: *gasps and drops weapon* Kuki?!?!?!?
Kuki: It's been ages...I thought you were dead....
Wally: I thought I'd never see you again...
And then she'd tell him she is NOT with Madame Margeret and they fall in love with each other again and she gets pregnant, etc. Oh, it would be a great fic...If anyone in this forum wants to write it then go ahead, I WILL SO TOTALLY READ IT!
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Post by Jas on Jul 23, 2009 9:51:30 GMT -5
Wow XD Too much credit! x3 Thanks a lot for the kind words! *tackle-glomps* That's so awesome, thanks so much!! :3 We think alike!  I had this vague plotline in my head about that specific period, about the things you mentioned ^^ I also kind of imagined that Kuki could help Wally hide from Mrs. Margeret, since she's a girl and less likely to be suspected. And Wally trying to find allies to join his team and all... Action, excitement and fluff! |
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Post by prettywitchiusaka on Jul 23, 2009 10:22:36 GMT -5
That sounds like a cool plot! Maybe you could write it Tater, seeings as how you're so interested in the idea yourself.
I actually remember being inspired by Jas's pic, and it got me thinking of a 60/362 story set in that time period. It takes place about 25 years after Madame Margaret has began to girl reign. Rachel has been forced into working for Margaret because of her spy skills, but hates doing so because she is going against both her own beleifs, and the beleifs of the man she fell in love with right before the incident occurred.
One day on teh battlefield, Rachel ends up meeting Patton, and teh two later meet in secret. They talk about their current lives and remenise about a simpler time. Patton however, confesses his love to Rachel, telling ehr that he wants to be with her. She denies any feelings she has towards him and denounces anything be able to happen between them because of teh current situation of the world. Eventually though, she gives into her desires, and they start up a passionate romance in secret.
Unfortunately, Rachel becomes pregnant with Patton's child. Not wanting to abort the child, they decide to wait for awhile until the baby starts to become noticeable, then fake Rachel's death and run away to live their lives in peace. UNfortunately, Madame Margaret discoveres their affair and locks Rachel up in the dungeon. Patton however manages to break her out, and the two make a run for it with teh guards on tehir trail. patton then sacrifices himself to save his beloved, only to die in her arms afterwards, but not before telling her ot not give up hope for a better tomorrow like they wanted. Heeding his words, she escapes into the woods.
About 7 or 8 months later, Rachel has the baby, and leaves it with the BND so that he can help make the difference she and Patton wanted. Going back to Madame Margaret's lair, she allows herself to be killed, her dying wish being for their son to be a saviour of humanity. Rachel then wakes up to find herself in her ten-year-old form, and is explained by the same aged Patton that because this was the time when her ideals as a person grew that she can remain this way in teh afterlife. Atfer embracing, he apologizes for letting her life end so tragically, but she tells him it's alright and that she has faith in their son, and the future.
The catch of the story is that it is written by teh child Rachel, who had to write a story for English class and deicded to do a what if situation to a mjor incident in the KND timeline. Patton reads it later on, and likes it so much that he asks if he can keep a copy of the story, to which she replies with a yes.
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Post by tater06 on Jul 23, 2009 20:14:05 GMT -5
That's really cool, prettywitchiusaka! That'd be a story definitely worth reading. Jas' stories inspire us all, apparently. A lot of her pictures give me ideas for "Finding Happiness." Like the one where Kuki's listening to Wally's heart? Yeah, I'm definitely putting that in there! :3 And Jas, you deserve all the credit in the world, girl. Your pics are a feast for my eyes! I could look in your gallery for hours...And I'd be like @_@
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Post by prettywitchiusaka on Jul 24, 2009 7:01:31 GMT -5
I love Jas's artwork as well. It doesn't give me lots of inspiration for stories like it does you tater, but that doesn't stop me from marveling in wonder at how well done her pictures are.
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Post by Jas on Jul 24, 2009 7:32:01 GMT -5
You guys are making me blush, honestly X3 It's even more of an honour that you guys can be inspired by a picture that I drew! I tell you, it's one of the biggest rewards you can get ^^ I'm really grateful, I really am! I'm as grateful as anyone could possibly express through a forum post x3 Thanks a lot you guys! It's very encouraging, thank you!
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Post by prettywitchiusaka on Jul 24, 2009 11:31:07 GMT -5
You're very welcome Jas.
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Post by tater06 on Aug 14, 2009 23:36:47 GMT -5
Yeah, you're welcome Jas! You totally deserve it!
You know what other fic I'd like to write? One where Numbuh 3 totally kicks some butt and saves the day, or maybe the world. I am so TIRED of people just thinking she's some useless girly girl whose only concern is rainbow monkeys and Numbuh 4. I mean, seriously!!!!
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Post by prettywitchiusaka on Aug 16, 2009 8:11:31 GMT -5
I agree with you there. Kuki may not be the brightest crayon in the box, but just because she acts innocent most of the time is no reason to assume that she's always like that. Besides, it's the sassy side of Kuki that I love the most.
I'd personally like to see you write a story like that, maybe even have Wally in slight denial of being saved by a girl and all.
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Post by prettywitchiusaka on Aug 29, 2009 16:48:35 GMT -5
This is a story concept I've had lying aroudn for quite some time now, and decided I might as well post here.
In this story, my fan character Alex's powers is having trouble controling her increased premonitional powers. Tired, she takes a sleep in Abby's room while they're watching a movie, and begins to have a premoniton in her sleep. Concerned for her friend, Abby goes to try and wake her up, but ends up getting sucked into her own visions, a brefi one involving her and Cree. This however does not last long, for Alex then wakes up and notices the frightened Abby. Concerned for her gfriend, she tries to talk to her, but is only pushed away by Abby.
Later, Alex tells the rest of Sector V what happened, and they all try to find an answer to what Abby could have possibly seen to have scared her. At teh same time in her own room, Abby herself is trying to recall what it is that scared her, and just what Cree was saying to her. Suddenly though, the KND get a call to stop Cree from unleashing Father's latest plot. But ocne they do, Cree escapes, only to have Abby come after her.
Once she catches up to her sister, the two girls share some witty banter with one another before they begin to duke it out. Cree however manages to overpower Abby and pins her to teh ground, beginning to taunt her sister once more. But as she does, Abby then remembers what Cree had said to her, it had been a flashback from when Cree had betrayed the KND. She tried to convince Cree to not join Father, but she angriily told her sister off, telling her that none of her past mattered and that Abby meant nothing to her as well. Angered by this, Abby then overpowers her own sister, beating the crap out of her good until teh rest of Sector V arrives to see teh final blow. Cree then escapes, leaving the others puzzled.
A few hours later, Abby sits outside staring at teh moon all alone until Alex comes to visit her. She says sorry for giving her such a bad premonition, but Abby just replies that it was alright. After a moment of silence follows, Alex asks if she wants to talk about what she saw, to whcih Abby replies that she'll explain soon enough, but not now because she'd rather not burden such a good friend. Alex then hugs Abby tightly, a hug which she fuly accepts as a stray tear runs down her cheek.
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Post by tater06 on Aug 29, 2009 17:58:35 GMT -5
Interesting. I would totally read it. Who is Alex? One of your OC's?
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Post by prettywitchiusaka on Aug 30, 2009 7:19:16 GMT -5
Yeah, she's an OC of mine. I should have made that clear. I may probably do it, you never really know, as I always like expanding my imagination as well.
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I had this vague plotline in my head about that specific period, about the things you mentioned ^^ I also kind of imagined that Kuki could help Wally hide from Mrs. Margeret, since she's a girl and less likely to be suspected. And Wally trying to find allies to join his team and all... Action, excitement and fluff! 
