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Post by prettywitchiusaka on Jul 24, 2009 11:30:27 GMT -5
I thought she was going to be Numbuh 999, since she's going to develop a crush on ehr son and Denise seemed to like Nigel in chapter four, so I just figured. That however, was outruled by the beginning to chapter five. But don't worry, I'll still wait to find out who Denise is going to be.
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Post by redstar on Jul 25, 2009 10:35:33 GMT -5
Oh poop! I'm sorry you were misunderstanding her, Prettywitch. ^^;; Denise was only complimenting Nigel on his bravery. She isn't 999.
Again, sorry for the misunderstanding.
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Post by prettywitchiusaka on Jul 25, 2009 12:48:01 GMT -5
Oh that's quite alright. We've all madew assumptions that were wrong when reading stories, so it's no big deal.
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Post by CCACorn26 on Jul 25, 2009 13:19:02 GMT -5
Hehehe. Nice new chapter, Allie. I have a strange feeling that Monty and May will get even closer in the coming chapters, if what I sensed of their conversation about politeness holds up. I could affirm Grim, Billy, and Mandy's appearance to Nigel, and I can remember that trio's "encounter" with the rest of Sector V. I trust that the rest of us will look forward to your next chapter once you have it ready to post.
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Post by redstar on Jul 26, 2009 16:03:46 GMT -5
^ Got that right! 0/999 Forever!  I should have more fluff for them too, since Nigel is there son after all. Glad you liked the chapter, and I need to start the new one soon. But tomorrow I'm going to St. Louis with my grandmother to go car shopping, she needs a new car. And then we'll be going to the Cardinals' game, yay! If I get up early enough, I may start to type it out. ^^; Though I typed out just a little of it before I went to bed on Thursday. Let 1/362 Live Long! ^^ |
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Post by CCACorn26 on Jul 28, 2009 17:50:01 GMT -5
Erm... right. If we're up for a date between Monty and May once they finish taking care of Grandfather, then Nigel and Rachel should be happy to encourage them before heading back to their own time. As Nigel and Rachel arrive in the present -- or Monty and May's future -- they might have some encouragement within them to pursue their own romantically friendly interests... with each other. Hopefully, you will have had fun with this baseball game of yours, and then, you can develop your new chapter as you wish, Allie. Success and good luck to you as you do so.
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Post by tater06 on Aug 1, 2009 19:03:19 GMT -5
Great job Allie! Sorry I haven't been on in a while, I've been busy. Loved the chapter, it'll really start getting the story in motion. The dogs are a very interesting addition to the group. I love it. Looking forward to the next chapter! And don't worry about posting. I myself have to start a new chap soon....
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I should have more fluff for them too, since Nigel is there son after all.
