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Post by mitter *712* on Oct 13, 2009 12:44:26 GMT -5
Yes, some of you were promised this story last year around christmas, and well... Let's just say the deadline was too short for 434 and I so... ^^'
But now I can announce that the long waited story is actually finnished! ;D I am just looking through the grammar and then I am going to send it to 434 so she can see if the ending needs some work, because it was my task to write the ending but I couldn't really put any more to it, but I think she talked about an idea of hers, which I am going to let her write xP
Finally the story which is about one year late will finally get uploaded, probably around December or so, 'cause there are a lot of grammar flaws from both mine and 434's side ^^'
Reading it through and correcting flaws sure takes longer time than I thought ^^' But it will be uploaded soon =3
<3 mitter *712* <3
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Post by wallysgirl on Oct 13, 2009 20:43:34 GMT -5
Yes, some of you were promised this story last year around christmas, and well... Let's just say the deadline was too short for 434 and I so... ^^' But now I can announce that the long waited story is actually finnished! ;D I am just looking through the grammar and then I am going to send it to 434 so she can see if the ending needs some work, because it was my task to write the ending but I couldn't really put any more to it, but I think she talked about an idea of hers, which I am going to let her write xP Finally the story which is about one year late will finally get uploaded, probably around December or so, 'cause there are a lot of grammar flaws from both mine and 434's side ^^' Reading it through and correcting flaws sure takes longer time than I thought ^^' But it will be uploaded soon =3 <3 mitter *712* <3 Ooh! Is it about Wally's little brother Joey? Awesome! I can't wait to read it!! *ish excited*
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Post by mitter *712* on Oct 14, 2009 4:10:03 GMT -5
Yup, you could say that x3 And it has a LOT of 3/4 fluff in it xP And random moments of course xD
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Post by prettywitchiusaka on Oct 14, 2009 7:14:09 GMT -5
Ooh, that sounds like it'll be fun.
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Post by mitter *712* on Dec 17, 2009 18:51:01 GMT -5
The chapters might be long but there are only seven of them so =P It's a collab between me and 434 (she doesn't come as often anymore) Well we did anything thinkable and unthinkable to make it fluffy, I hope we succeeded xD
Here's the first chapter for y'all =3 I am still correcting but I figured (I'm so slow) that I could put up the chapters while correcting and stuff xP
<3 mitter *712* <3 ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Operation J.O.E.Y Joyful Overtaking of Extremely-annoying Yelling-baby Writing operatives: Numbuh 434 and mitter *712* ENJOY =3
Disclaimer: KND belong to Mr. Tom Warburton ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Day 1
It was in the middle of January, it was freezing outside, and the suns lazy beams could barely be seen because of the grey-ish clouds. The wind was blowing as if playing its own little melody. A short 10 year old, blond Australian boy (better known as Wallabee ‘Wally’ Beetles) looked out of his window. He was really bored. There hadn’t been that many missions since their sector leader Numbuh 1 AKA Nigel Uno had left to join the Galactic Kids Next Door. Wally let out a little sigh of boredom. “Honey” came his mother’s voice from the kitchen. Wally turned around to face his messy room and went downstairs to the kitchen. “What?” He asked “As you know your father and I have our 20’th wedding anniversary tomorrow, so therefore we planned on going to Hawaii where we had our first wedding trip” “When?” Wally asked, he suddenly felt awake “Tonight” His father said “So we'll leave you in charge of the house and little Joey for a week” His mother said joyfully. Wally looked to where Joey was; Joey was sitting on the kitchen floor and goofing around. “But mom!” Wally started “No buts Wallabee, your father and I have planned this for a very long time. And we’re going tonight. End of story” Wally let out a sigh, he knew he was defeated. No argue he could possibly think of could save him out of this one.
8.00 pm A bunch of suitcases we’re loaded into the taxi. Wally stood with Joey on his arm to say goodbye and wish his parents a nice and safe trip. “Well Honey” Said his mom “If there is anything you just call the hotel and ask for us. This is the number” She gave Wally a little piece of paper with a phone number on it “And don’t forget to give Joey his bottle at least three times a day” She was about to get in “Oh! And remember to change his diaper” she sat down and rolled down the window “And don’t forget to let his little night lamp be on when he sleeps” the taxi began to drive “And don’t forget to call” she had to yell to make sure he heard it all “And remember to brush you teeth! BYE WALLY WE LOVE YOU KISS KISS!!” and then the taxi was gone. Back at the house stood Wally with Joey in his arms and didn’t really know what to do. He went inside and sat Joey on the floor in the living room. “Well Joey” Wally said “What do you wanna do” Joey just looked at him and smiled goofy. “Okay then… What about, drawing something?” He said and went inside the kitchen to get crayons and paper. “There you go” He said as he put the stuff in front of Joey. Joey began to chew on a purple crayon, while Wally just scratched his neck a little. “What am I going to do with you?” He asked himself more than Joey, as he looked on Joey who had started to draw with the red crayon on the floor instead of the paper. Wally sat on the couch across Joey, he looked despairing at Joey. If his parents had told him a week before instead of the same day, he could have asked his team mates for help. But probably none of them would have wanted to help him anyway. None of them except… “Psh… Nah! She wouldn’t! Would she?” He looked at the phone. He could of course call her, and ask. He went over to the phone and picked it up “No” He slammed the receiver down again “I don’t need help” He sat down on the couch again, and looked at Joey who was painting the floor yellow. He sighed at stood up from the couch. He went over to the phone, picked up the receiver and plugged her number. He knew he was defeated.
9.30 pm The doorbell rang; he stood up and opened the door. Outside stood a 10 year old black haired girl with an over sleeved pink rainbow monkey jacket on. “Hi Wally!” She smiled and waved joyfully “Yeah, hi Kuki” he said and let her in. She took of her jacket, to reveal her over sleeved green blouse. “So, where do I put this?” She asked as she showed him the jacket. “Put it on one of the hooks” he said, as he waived his hand in the direction of the hooks. “Okay!” She said as she jumped joyful over to the hooks where only two jackets hung at the moment, those jackets belonged to Wally and Joey. She hung her own jacket next to Wally’s and smiled a little. “So… Where's Joey?” She asked “In the living room” He pointed in to the living room where Joey was sitting “I don’t see anyone, only a blank peace of paper and a colored floor” “Really?” He looked inside the living room, but it was just as Kuki had just said. There was no Joey “You think he got kidnapped?” she asked “Don’t even joke about stuff like that! We have to find him. JOEY!” He began to look around in the house, Kuki followed him. “I didn’t know your brother liked to play hide and seek” She said with a smile on her face. He looked a little at her. “What?” she asked while looking at him in confusion. “Nothing, just help me find Joey” “Okay”
10.02 pm “Where could he be?” Wally asked “Well, we haven’t looked in the bathroom yet” “Why didn’t you tell me that before?” He dragged her with him into the bathroom, where they found a sleeping Joey on the floor. They looked a little. “Aww” she said with a quite voice “He’s adorable” “Especially when he's sleeping” Wally said and picked up Joey. It might be Wally picked up Joey in order to get him to bed, but he probably shouldn’t have done that, because in the moment he picked up Joey, Joey woke up and began to cry. “Oh crud!” Wally yelled “Hush, hush” Kuki said trying to make Joey stop crying “Maybe we should just get him up to bed, and sing him to sleep?” Kuki suggested “Fine! I'll do the carrying, you'll do the singing” Wally said as he began carrying Joey upstairs to his room. Wally gently put Joey down in his cradle “Okay. Sing him a lullaby” Wally said “Right now?” Kuki asked “Yes, right now” Wally said as he rolled his eyes at her “Gee, I don’t know Wally…” “JUST SING THE CRUDDY LULLABY!!” Joey began to cry “IF YOU WANT ME TO HELP YOU, THEN DON‘T YELL AT ME!” Kuki practically screamed with tears in her eyes. Wally looked shocked at her, he already felt bad for yelling at her ”I’m sorry Kuki, I didn’t mean to yell. I’m just really tired” he said ”It’s okay… Just don’t do it again” ”I won’t, I promise” Kuki hugged Wally gently and the only thing he could do was blushing ”Okay… I’ll sing a lullaby” She cleared her throat, and began to sing a beautiful Japanese lullaby of which she knew the words in her head, Wally did not understand the meaning of this song but it sure was calming. Joey slept immediately, Kuki smiled at Wally who gave her a warm smile back she looked down and blushed like mad. ”Lets go down in the living room” Wally whispered and they both sneaked out of the room, and went downstairs to the living room. They went into the living room and sat down on the couch. This wasn't going to be as easy as they thought.
“So…’’ Kuki started. Wally looked up. “I better go home.’’ She finished while getting up. He held her back. “You better stay here.’’ He said while grabbing her hand. She looked over her shoulder at him. “Why?’’ She asked. He pointed at the window. Kuki looked at the window and saw it snowing. “Great…’’ She said grumpy while sitting back on the couch with her arms folded. Wally smirked and put something in Kuki’s hands. She looked and saw the phone in her hands. “Here ya go…call your parents and tell them you’re sleeping at my house.’’ He said. “But where do I have to sleep?’’ She asked him. He thought for a minute or 5…6…alright 8. “Don’t worry we have a guest room!’’ He said while rubbing the back of his head. Kuki smiled at him, took the phone and called her parents. “I think…’’ Wally finished nervously but Kuki didn’t hear him. “Mom? It’s me Kuki. It’s snowing outside so I can’t come home.’’ She said. Her mom answered something but he couldn’t hear it. “But mom his…no you don’t understand his…’’ She sighed and hooked up the phone. “Well…what did she say?’’ Wally asked curiously. “Well…my mom said I could sleep here but…’’ She replied. “But what?’’ He asked back. “Well…she’s going on vacation with dad for a week and she’s leaving in an hour. And she said I could stay here for a week but she doesn’t know your parents aren’t here…so that’s a problem.’’ She said. Wally looked at her confused. “So you have to stay here for a week?’’ He asked. She just nodded. “What about Mushi?’’ He asked. “She’s with Sandy.’’ She said while folding her arms. Wally looked at her.
11.30 pm “Are you sure this is it?’’ They were standing in Wally’s parents room. Because of the snow Kuki couldn’t get her pajama or any of her other stuff so she had to sleep in some of Wally’s mom's stuff. “Yeah…Well my mom always wears this.’’ Wally said while taking an orange pajama out of his mom’s closet. “I think it’s too big.’’ She said. “Don’t worry Kuki we’ll get your pajama tomorrow.’’ Wally said while putting a hand on her shoulder. Kuki sighed and stood up. “I't’s late I better get to sleep.’’ She said while walking to the guest room. Wally followed her.
11.40 pm “Can I come in?’’ Wally asked. He was waiting outside the room for Kuki to put her pajama on. “Yes I’m ready.’’ She answered. Wally entered the room and saw Kuki standing in a huge pajama. Wally smirked. “Don’t laugh Wally it’s not funny!’’ She said angrily. Wally put a hand on her mouth. “Shh…not so loud I don’t want Joey to wake up.’’ He said whispering. Kuki pushed his hand away. “Don’t laugh at me then.’’ She whispered back. “Alright I’m sorry it’s just so…big.’’ He said. Kuki folded her arms. “Anyway we better go to sleep it’s gonna be a long day tomorrow.’’ Wally said. Kuki nodded, walked over to the bed and laid in it. Wally smiled and opened the door. “Wally?’’ Kuki asked. He turned around. “Yeah?’’ He asked. “Can’t I have a goodnight kiss?’’ She asked. Wally was shocked and started to blush immediately. “A…k…iss?’’ He asked nervously. “Yes my mom always give me one on the cheek.’’ She answered. “But I’m not your…’’ He started but Kuki interrupted him. “…same for my dad.’’ She said smiling. Wally sighed in disbelieve. He was to tired to say ‘no’ he also knew if he did that she would probably cry and all, so he walked over to her, closed his eyes and gave her a kiss on her cheek. Kuki blushed same for Wally. “Goodnight Wally.’’ She said. “Goodnight Kooks.’’ He whispered back. Then he stood up and went to his room.
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