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Post by numbuh342 on Dec 19, 2007 4:56:39 GMT -5
Your death is near my little friend you never know when I'll come again I'll take your soul and banish it forever never will you be free from the claws of darkness within me. The day is near when darkness will rule the time will come when you will all be gone so heed my word mortal one I am coming your soul is mine.  I'm scared |
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Post by Ford "Jerk not a very nice person" Johnes on Dec 19, 2007 12:52:52 GMT -5
hmmm, t reminds me of the last boss in GHIII, named lou. he's the devil  |
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Post by ChyukiPastukiSuzuki on Dec 19, 2007 20:16:05 GMT -5
Im the devil.
xD
Love it.
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Post by numbuh342 on Dec 19, 2007 21:04:13 GMT -5
thanks...I was reading a book about death and undead and dead coming back to life for revenge so I wrote this out of my wits!
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Post by Tyler743 on Dec 20, 2007 11:21:50 GMT -5
Its was kinda...evil but... I LOVE IT. Thats really good. Your very talentent. ;D
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Post by numbuh342 on Dec 20, 2007 22:21:50 GMT -5
thanks tyler!
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Post by angel10 on Dec 22, 2007 23:48:45 GMT -5
yes yes i could never wright that good although...it is quite dark lol....but other then that its perfect!  |
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Post by cony2692 on Dec 23, 2007 12:48:14 GMT -5
that was different, but good. |
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Post by angel10 on Dec 23, 2007 13:36:18 GMT -5
very good indead *cough* i mean deed! sorry i really got into that poem, XD what variaty of talent this forum holds!...its nice ;D
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Post by numbuh342 on Dec 28, 2007 9:40:03 GMT -5
thanks I bet you have great talent too angel and I have another one coming up..." Demon Seed"
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