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Post by Numbuh 434 on Dec 7, 2008 15:00:38 GMT -5
I’m sitting in the dark listening to the people outside I just wanna sleep And never wake up again My life is a terrible dream that will never end until I die I begin to cry…thinking about the past hurts me in my entire body But most of all in my heart A tear runs down my cheek… Yes, I have felt love if that’s your question But he didn’t loved me…he used me like dirt I make a fist and bang with my head on the wall Why?Oh why did he do that? I stop and sigh I don’t care anymore…the world’s one big mess I look at the gun in my hand Nobody needs me here I’m standing now with the gun to my head Nobody likes me I wait and sigh Nobody wants me I hear a shot and smile Finally I’m free… xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx I wrote this poem last year when I almost wanted to kill me...I know it's quiet shocking but I always have liked this poem cause it make you think...Hope ya liked it
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Post by RohaHat on Dec 7, 2008 15:06:10 GMT -5
Some poems touch you from the start. Some poems hold you through the whole thing. With this one, it was the last line that got me.
I'm not a very empathic person, so your poem getting through to me at all is a big thing.
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Post by mitter *712* on Dec 7, 2008 17:08:52 GMT -5
Hmm...? It's so sad, yet beautiful =3 I love the last line, even though it's a sad way to break free... 5/5
*glompz* I want youuu~ You're very important to me, don't dissapear =3 *glompz*
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Post by Numbuh 434 on Dec 10, 2008 13:23:48 GMT -5
@rohahat: Thanks I needed to read it in class and my teacher was quit shocked she asked if everything was alright I just smiled at her. mitter *712*: Thank my soul sister *glomps* I never ever wanna dissapear for you!!!! Me loves you!!! *huggles*
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Post by mitter *712* on Dec 11, 2008 14:21:52 GMT -5
Me wuws you too *huggles*
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