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Post by CCACorn26 on Apr 20, 2009 9:36:10 GMT -5
www.fanfiction.net/s/4583857/11/Finding_HappinessDeceiving Kuki into attending a party in which she's completely alone, separate from Wally? Leave it to me to sincerely wonder if Brooke and her friends have anything better to do. I can only imagine how furious Wally will be once he realizes that Brooke has tricked Kuki once more. Hopefully, Wally and Kuki will be fine in the end, leaving Brooke in the dust.
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Post by allie on Apr 20, 2009 15:11:15 GMT -5
I don't know why, but I just think the party might kinda' endup in a plotline like in the scene from the movie Hotel For Dogs... But you know, it would make a really fluffy chapter in the ending.
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Post by CCACorn26 on Apr 20, 2009 19:00:39 GMT -5
Speculating about a party, are you, fellow Wally/Kuki shipper? Wally and Kuki might very well admit their feelings for each other, despite Brooke's dark attempt to manipulate their growing romantic friendship for her own purposes. If anyone else ends up sincerely supporting Wally and Kuki together, then good for them, I should say.
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Post by tater06 on Apr 23, 2009 14:57:39 GMT -5
Thank yo so much guys!!! I really appreciate it. Heh heh, the twelfth chapter is gonna be fluffffffffffyyyyyyyyy............
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Post by CCACorn26 on Apr 23, 2009 15:50:53 GMT -5
I would have expected as much, tater06. If romantic fluff is what Wally and Kuki are about, then I'd say there was plenty of it in the show, and the Panda Warriors are quite eager to extend that fluff even further. I doubt that Brooke and her friends comprehend just what they're getting into, and yet, they'd rather see Kuki be permanently pessimistic in order to maintain their reputation. They wish to "invite" her to a party in order to destroy her once and for all, and Wally might not find out until it's too late. Launching nuclear missiles at, say, the Kids Next Door Moonbase would be a different level of evil, but hopefully, Wally and Kuki's romantic friendship will still light the way.
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Post by Jas on May 18, 2009 5:40:07 GMT -5
WOOOHOOOO!! X3 CONFESSION TIME!!! This chapter had so much! Sadness, anger, fluff and love! Gosh, I felt SO sorry for Kuki at thatparty! Those people are some nasty pieces of work! XP Thanks goodness Wally got there in time! And deseveredly punched Todd in the face! >:3 Hahaa! GO WALLY!! And then it just got better and better! ^^ Gosh... it was so sweeeeeeet! x3 I'm gonna read it again after school! ;D *giggles* It was wonderful! I was so happy when I saw the update! The KND fanfic section hasn't been as active as it used to be. So it was really nice to see it! :3 Great work, tater! n__n
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Post by allie on May 18, 2009 7:10:02 GMT -5
I know, I'm kinda losing... hope for the KND FF.net section. ^^; But Tater and I are the last two people who want to save it. And by goodness, we're gonna! I already reviewed the chapter but man; if it wasn't for you, Tater06 and Rika, Jas, I wouldn't be into 3/4 as much anymore. ^^ It was the first full 3/4 fic I've ever read, and it was dang exciting with the drama and romance, and the fluff, and--oh, oh, you know what I'm talkin' 'bout! ;D I still predict in the future they'll have TWELVEDY BILLION babies! ... Right with 1/362, 'cause of the poll on dA. xD
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Post by CCACorn26 on May 22, 2009 9:24:18 GMT -5
www.fanfiction.net/s/4583857/12/Finding_HappinessBingo. Wally and Kuki are, for all practical purposes, together, and Brooke and her "friends", if they can even be called that, have been left alone to rot in their drunken stupor. Leave it to me to wonder what would happen if, say, General David Petraeus gave those teenagers some lessons in civics and history, but perhaps that is redundant. On a different level, I learned once more why I typically work alone in my endeavors, or at least attempt to. My choices are mine alone, without any direct outside influence, unlike the teenagers "desperate", as Wally put it, for Brooke's approval. Now that Wally and Kuki have found each other, the Panda Warriors can cheer the eventual conclusion of this story by tater06.
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Post by tater06 on May 23, 2009 17:16:44 GMT -5
Oh, I was so happy by that chapter. And NLW's review was the best of them all. I love reviews with all my heart, and I'm glad you're happy with the story. Gotta write the next chapter.....It's gonna be a simple, smiley chapter, you know, since the last one was....intense. And one last thing.... CONFESSIONS ARE HARD TO WRITE! I kept changing my mind and deleting stuff, I'm glad you guys were happy with it.
So is there any stories or drawings or anything you guys want me to take a look at? I'd be happy to. Just let me know. I checked your Deviant last time, Jas. Still doing awesome, as usual. Loved Kuki's outfit in the old-fashioned one. And the one with them and their kids? So adorable. I'll check for more drawings soon.
Well, that's all for me.....Maybe I'll start writing the next chapter soon....I really gotta be more active here......*starts thinking of random things and walks off*
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Post by Jas on May 24, 2009 6:29:59 GMT -5
Aww, thanks Tater! :3 *glomps* That's very kind! ^-^
I really enjoyed reading it! I'm already looking forward to the next chapter! X3 *bounces off the walls excitedly* I also liked that line about Kuki's thoughts. It was something like "She couldn't believe this was happening to her." I though it suited it just perfectly, I can imagine it must feel so surreal to her. But thank goodness it's al really happening! ^-^ She 100% deserves it!
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Post by Jas on Jun 13, 2009 6:49:54 GMT -5
And ofcourse, chapter 13 was another piece of gold! ^-^ Ooh, the sweet awkwardness after being boyfriend and girlfriend! *giggles* x3 It was very cute how Wally first was too shy to kiss her ^-^ But it all worked out in the end, yay! :3 I'm curious to see how it'll continue! n__n
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Post by CCACorn26 on Jun 13, 2009 11:34:32 GMT -5
www.fanfiction.net/s/4583857/13/Finding_HappinessWhile Mushi attempts to figure out what's going on with Kuki, Mr. Melloni is wondering how Wally and Kuki have progressed, thinking of another couple he'd seen. Even Wally and Kuki didn't seem to mind Melloni's help, and they were eager to get through their working day as loyally as they could. Now that they're starting to talk about their respective families, I sense that Wally and Kuki will have an even easier time getting to know each other quite well, opening up new possibilities of realization between them.
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Post by tater06 on Jun 14, 2009 19:45:56 GMT -5
The next chapter is about their next day of school, and Wally will make a phone call to his Australian friends, Matt and Chase. The chapter after that, Wally's parents will meet Kuki. Don't know what I'll do after that....I'm hoping to get Wally in a fight at one point....And I think I'll end the story in a dance.....Hmmm.....
Thanks everybody! I'm having trouble with the next chapter, but hopefully people will like it...
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Post by CCACorn26 on Jun 14, 2009 22:36:51 GMT -5
No need to worry, tater. Take your time with that new chapter. I may be a little busy gathering my thoughts around my own past fanfictions in the meantime. The first real-life villain whose agenda I tried estimating through my Coodename: Kids Next Door fanfiction model may have just launched a complete takeover of the country he's been tyrannizing for the past four years, with the help of some... allies. Much as I hate having to state this, his brand of evil might actually outdo Brooke and her friends' barrages of insults to Kuki, and "Nightmares... or Premonitions of Chaos?" might demonstrate that evil. At any rate, I trust that you will do well with this chapter, fellow Panda Warrior.
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Post by allie on Jun 15, 2009 9:32:29 GMT -5
I FOND THE PERFECT ENDING TO THE FIC!!!! [youtube]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SytK635LkLU&feature=related [/youtube] Awww, this is so sweet! TOTALLY KUKI/WALLY! ;D It reminded me of Mr. Melloni right off the dot! Since he's all for romance. And plus, this is a "Modern-Day" Romeo & Juilet. Wally&Kuki = Romeo&Juilet. :3 ... Pizza, too. ^^ *giggles* I wanna see this movie! It's called Pizza My Heart about two workers in a pizza resturant fall in love. (it's an ABC Family Original Movie, and I love those kinds. :3)
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