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Post by allie on Mar 2, 2009 19:47:18 GMT -5
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Post by Jas on Mar 3, 2009 10:08:59 GMT -5
I'm LOVING this Allie!  Woooh, the GKND is appearing too! ^-^ Way awesome!! |
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Post by allie on Mar 6, 2009 7:57:56 GMT -5
Thanks, Jas!!! ;D I'm glad you're liking it. The 4th chapter is now updated if you wanna see it.  The 'date' is cut very short, but I wanted to complete this chapter before tomorrow; I'll be at Redside Hill all day. XD |
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Post by CCACorn26 on Mar 6, 2009 12:01:44 GMT -5
More Galactic Kids Next Door appearances, lead Starlight Soldier? Perhaps Nigel and Rachel will encounter this mysterious girl in the future, and no doubt they'll be interested in finding out just what's going on. For now, though, methinks that they've a date to get to, and hopefully, that date will go rather smoothly.
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Post by Paula on Mar 6, 2009 16:40:48 GMT -5
Lol, I've been reading this and for some reason-- though I am loving all the fluffyness, I am just cracking up on all of the misinterpretation between the two. IT's cute and funny: Nigel's use of Wally's line backfiring on him, Rachel thinks he's meaning something else...and some girl is hurting (or soon will be) in the future...okay, maybe that last bit wasn't funny, but the others were.
Nice fic Allie!
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Post by Jas on Mar 6, 2009 17:25:29 GMT -5
I loved that one too! XD "The lines"! *giggles* Wally's smoooooth XD I also liked Neb & Lun near the flowerpot ^^ I read chapter 4 and am still clinging onto it! :3 That's also the part when we can situate your fic "Cravings", right? ^^ Because Nigel was leaving for his date there! That's awesome, kinda like a side-story n__n Can't wait for the next update! C: Have a great time in Redside Hill, Allie! |
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Post by CCACorn26 on Mar 8, 2009 17:22:08 GMT -5
Lunira and Nebulos? Ah, yes. They seemed to be quite curious about that plant pot. That large hole was mysterious, but then again, that girl at the window may be even more mysterious. I'm sensing curiosity from Nigel about Rachel's dreams, and maybe Wally and Kuki will be even more curious themselves as Nigel describes what has been happening between him and Rachel. If Wally and Kuki end up helping Nigel and Rachel during this little quest, then kudos to that couple from the original Kids Next Door.
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Post by allie on Mar 9, 2009 19:00:35 GMT -5
Hey! Good news everyone. I'm THIIIISSS close to finishing chapter 5, yep-yep! And just a little something... Paula, I hope you'll like the little cameo I threw in. Okay--Hoagie and Abby ARE in it. XD They're photographers for the newspaper of Zoss! (my fictional Ohio city; a combination of the names 'Zoey' and 'Ross') I just hope you guys won't hurt Wally too badly what he's trying to do around Nigel's back...  |
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Post by CCACorn26 on Mar 9, 2009 20:57:35 GMT -5
Hoagie and Abby, as well? This story gets more and more interesting with each new chapter. If what Wally intends to do involves Rachel, then Nigel might not think too highly of such a development. Fortunately, maybe Hoagie and Abby will help Nigel and Rachel get closer together later on in the story. In fact, at the moment, lead Starlight Soldier and fellow Samurai, maybe you can have Hoagie and Abby have some moments together as they admire Nigel and Rachel's bond, probably if Nigel and Rachel are together themselves.
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Post by allie on Mar 10, 2009 6:55:50 GMT -5
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Post by CCACorn26 on Mar 10, 2009 8:53:31 GMT -5
Ah. Intriguing setup, perhaps more by the minute. It would seem that Wally's photographic antics proved irresistible for Hoagie and Abby in pursuit of more moments between Nigel and Rachel. I did catch Lee and Sonia's cameos, though. In the end, with Nigel and Rachel's bond getting stronger and Rachel's mysterious features astounding Nigel even further, this story should get even more fascinating.
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Post by allie on Mar 18, 2009 6:49:19 GMT -5
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Post by CCACorn26 on Mar 18, 2009 12:42:29 GMT -5
It would seem that Kyra, Nebulos, and Lunira have begun to suspect that Rachel is falling for Nigel. Unfortunately, that attack by Zarzig and Ruby startled Nigel thoroughly, despite Rachel's order. Hopefully, this little mishap will be cleared up in the future.
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Post by allie on Mar 25, 2009 6:48:41 GMT -5
Hi guys, just on a little note-- I'm sorry this is taking more time. I bet you guys are all starting to wonder where the 7th chapter is, but I don't have it typed yet. ^^; I guess I'm focusing more on my newest 1/362 fairytale story in my head... but fear not, I'll type it ASAP! *points finger into air* ... Plus I gotta re-watch Princess, I haven't seen it in a week. |
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Post by tater06 on Mar 25, 2009 19:28:56 GMT -5
You should put it on fanfiction so I can read it! ^_^
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Woooh, the GKND is appearing too! ^-^ Way awesome!!
The 'date' is cut very short, but I wanted to complete this chapter before tomorrow; I'll be at Redside Hill all day. XD
