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Post by allie on Mar 25, 2009 20:03:18 GMT -5
I just put it on, too! ^_^ Thanks so much, Tater!
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Post by allie on Mar 28, 2009 11:08:54 GMT -5
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Post by CCACorn26 on Mar 28, 2009 14:42:20 GMT -5
(startled blinking) Oh, my bad, Allie. I didn't even realize that part, I'm afraid. At any rate, perhaps Nigel really will be able to help Rachel out with whatever she's searching for, so that they will be able to... kiss and make up, so to speak.
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Post by allie on Apr 11, 2009 11:24:10 GMT -5
Guys, I'm so sorry for the long wait. Forgive me. T-T I need to watch Princess again and get me back into kickin' juice! But, I know this may be spoilers, and I bet Jas will be jumping for joy when she hears. XD Just some main ideas for the last two chapters; -Sonia is the new 'princess', and Zinc is arriving to be healed by her -Kuki and Wally show-up at the castle to have a word with Rachel, but the galactic races are revealed to them... And... Kuki gives birth to her baby. (I hope you don't mind if it's Koa, Jas! ^^) -Nigel & Rachel arrive home safely to the castle with Sonia, EVE.2 and Zinc. (like I said, the ending will be a bit different than the movie's ending  ) -Nigel&Rachel share some time together outside, explaining to each other that they're sorry... which leads to Nigel proposing... and Rachel accepting. ^__^ -More Nebunira fluff! :3 -Wedding at night, and a dance in the gardens in the moonlight... <3 *sigh* -Nebulos is the priest. XD (I think it would be so funny!), Lunira as the flower girl, Wally and Kuki attending the wedding of course with their new guest Koa. -Lee arrives, worried about Sonia (Awww... you knew it was coming.) -Happily ever after for everybody!!! ... Those are the main points, yeah. ^___^ I hope you don't mind. I know it's cliche-ish, but I kinda like plots like that. |
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Post by CCACorn26 on Apr 11, 2009 12:30:20 GMT -5
I know it's cliche-ish, but I kinda like plots like that. "Cliche-ish"? I may be less worried about time periods regarding your story. It may be pleasantly surprising that Lee and Sonia will appear alongside Nigel and Rachel, but I should enjoy seeing these developments unfold. Nigel and Rachel will be able to make up and get together... so that they and their friends will be happy. |
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Post by allie on Apr 17, 2009 17:01:26 GMT -5
Nigel was tossing and turning in the middle of the night and throughout. He couldn’t stop thinking about what he did to Rachel the other day. Now she had only one day left.
When he rose from his bed, he decided to go after her in the morning. Ignoring what Wally had in the paper, he was true to follow what Kuki said to him the night before.
“Stop. Take a deep look down, and see who you really are.”
What if he really WAS the Searcher? He was in denial all this time? Of course he was truly in love with the princess, and he “lied” to her but what if he was the Searcher all along?
Wally had other plans for the afternoon, actually… He decided to go off to that castle with Kuki and give that princess a piece of his mind. After what Nigel had told them the other night when he came home from the afternoon at the castle, he was heartbroken over the loss of Princess Rachel. Wally knew all along that she was a type of “deranged” person and cruddy.
Kuki thought to herself that the princess would forgive Nigel in time, yet… she would love to see the castle herself!
Nigel left the house early, telling Wally to wait a little later. That it wasn’t a ‘goodtime’ to talk with the princess.
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When the Brit arrived at the castle, he got out of the taxi and walked onto the front porch. He heard disturbing roars, hisses, and all-above an outrage. What was happening in there?! Wasn’t Rachel supposed to be settling them down?
He knocked on the door.
Kyra was inside, sighing with relief. “Princess!” she whispered out-loud, hurrying to the door. She opened it, and revealed it was none-other than Nigel Uno.
“You?” she said, raising an eyebrow.
“Please, Kyra! I—I need to speak with Rachel.” said Nigel, holding the door opened with his right arm.
“Go away you—you species exterminator!” Kyra growled, showing off her pointed teeth and green tongue. Nigel’s eyes decreased, and stepped back.
“Please, I only want to help!” he pleaded. “Where’s Rachel? I—I need to talk with her!”
Kyra sighed, stepping out into the sunshine and closed the door behind her. “She went out to do her own searching with one of the Galactic Force’s robots. The young girl would be described wearing a pink blouse, red skirt, and a light-blonde pony-tail.”
“She’s out there on her own in the city?” Nigel whispered.
“Rachel is very bold but fragile—she had to at least try to find this girl.”
“But why?” Nigel asked, raising an eyebrow. “Why must she find this… girl?”
“Rachel is the healer to the aliens who are drawn to her with an instinct.” Kyra replied. “All of the princesses are found as orphans by the searchers. If this young girl—the next princess isn’t inside the castle tomorrow morning, she will lose her power.”
“… Then what if I am him.” whispered Nigel, eyes narrowed. “Kyra, what if I AM the Searcher?”
Kyra’s long ears perked. “Then go. Go out there and search!”
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Near the Waterfront, small storage buildings were close together with alleys everywhere, and doors in back. Rachel, together with EVE.2 by her side was trying so hard to locate the girl.
Books were everywhere; from lose shelves to high rows on the ground. A few windows brought in the sunshine. EVE.2 was hovering above a few books here and there, with some sort of hand flashlight used in her arm.
Suddenly, the robot spotted something. “Prin-cess.” She said, turning her head. Rachel walked over, revealing her hooded-cloak. Looking down, feeling a gasp escape.
A dragon… oh my, he was young. Only around ten years old, at least. He was shining of silver in the sunlight around the dusty books, revealing that his wing was pinned by a giant thorn.
“Location of new princess—Negative.” EVE.2 closed her eyes, hovering lightly. Rachel wrapped an arm around the little robot, smiling. “No… no, you did good.” She said, trying to cheer her up. “You did very well, EVE.2.”
The adult princess sat down next to the dragon, examining his wing. “Let’s try to get this pain out of you.” Rachel whispered, petting the dragon’s snout.
“Mmm…” The dragon moaned. His eyes slightly opened, seeing the princess. “You…came…” he whispered. “I…thought…”
Rachel and EVE.2 stared down at him.
“You… ran away.” The dragon finished, yawning.
“Ran away? Oh… oh, my.” Rachel said, realizing. “Was there a girl here, before me?”
“Yes.” said the dragon, raising his head. He shook his scales, and yawned again in the sunshine. “She had a lighter-color of yellow hair, wearing pink. I… I wanted to come quietly but she was so frightened that she ran out. It was only last night. I was only… trying to tell her to heal my wing.”
The silver dragon lifted left wing that the thorn was bringing pain in. Small drops of dry blood were scattered around nearby the hole.
Rachel and EVE.2 continued to stare at the magnificent dragon in the sunlight.
“Alright… maybe I—I kinda growled at her… but in a friendly tone.” The dragon blushed icy-blue.
“It’s alright.” Rachel said, taking a good look at the wing. “I’ll have this out in no time.” She sat down once more, sliding her wings over the wing to massage it.
“What’s your name?” Rachel asked the dragon.
“Zinc.” replied the dragon, giving her a toothy grin. “And I guess... that you’re Princess Rachel?” The princess nodded. Zinc’s eyes gleamed with hope.
“I knew it! I’m sorry I was drawn to the next princess…” Zinc wagged his tail, looking around. “But what are you doing down here?”
“We’ve come to search for the princess, before my birthday.” said Rachel. Her business was now focused on pulling out the thorn. “But it isn’t your fault, you’ve had an instinct.”
Zinc popped a few teeth out, smiling. “Oh wow… thanks for the information.” He bowed his head gratefully. “I love to meet new friends.”
Rachel smiled. “If the girl had slept here, she must be near the Waterfront.”
EVE.2 blinked. She looked down at the princess, tilting her head to the side. “Directive?” The princess looked up at her companion, and nodded. “EVE.2, would you be willing to do me a favor?”
The robot’s eyes gleamed. “What’s the directive?”
“The directive… To find the Searcher.”
“The Searcher?” EVE.2 whistled cheerfully.
Rachel nodded. “Yes, that’s your new directive. To locate Nigel, bring him here. When we’ll talk through yesterday’s problems, we’ll finally be able to locate the new princess. Can you do that, EVE.2? Can you find ‘Nigel Uno’?”
The long, bunny-like antennas bounced happily, and the orange, hovering robot nodded with a sparkle in her eye. “Yes!” she chirped. “Location—Nigel Uno!”
“Don’t let people suspect you, either.” Rachel whispered, with her eyes narrowed. EVE.2 saluted with a short whistle. She floated out of the building, and to the Waterfront.
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Wally and Kuki finally arrived at the castle, stepping out of the car.
“An’ then ah’m gonna say, ‘Ya cruddy girl! Why’d ya have’ta go and break my mate’s heart like that?’” Wally was practicing his lecture towards the princess.
Yet… he had no idea that Kuki was completely freaking out. When Wally paused, she always interrupted with “Wally?” In the car he was still going over his lecture, with “Wally?” over and over!
He continued to ignore her, and the two reached the front porch. The Aussie knocked onto the door, and Kuki was fidgeting. She was ready to explode… and really, explode.
Her bun was ready to bust outta that oven so dang hard it was burning.
“C’mon, ya cruddy princess! Getting your dress smoothed out, are ya’?” Wally crossed his arms, tapping his foot. Kuki was ready to yelp out in pain, taking hold of her husband’s arm—very, very, tightly.
“’Ey! What’s the big idea, Kuki?”
“The… the baby’s coming.”
“The baby’s coming?” Wally repeated. “…Are ya sure?”
“YES!” Kuki screamed.
“The baby’s comin’… the baby’s comin’… the baby’s—”
In a flash, an alien octopus with a bowl full of water on his head opened the door. He looked up, crying, “Princess! It’s so good to see…” His name was Inky, and boy did his jaw totally drop to the ground when he was facing both Wally and Kuki!
“AHHHHHH!!!” screamed Inky, placing two tentacles on his bowl of water.
Kuki and Wally screamed in unison, back at the alien.
“AHHHHHH!!!!! … The baby’s comin’? AHHHHHHH!!!! AH’ DON’T BELIEVE IT! AH’M GONNA BE A DAD!”
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“I’m t-telling you, Lee! He was big, and blue-webbed wings, and with a mighty, low growl…” Sonia, a girl with light-blonde hair was explaining to her close friend on what she last night while she was sleeping.
Her friend Lee was wearing a white and blue-stripped t-shirt with brown pants and on old, worn-out Eskimo hat. He also was wearing an apron. He was working in an ice-cream stand that was on the Waterfront near other shops outdoors.
“Aw, c’mon Sonia… it must have been another nightmare. Which those aren’t cool, I know. You’ve had bad nights like this before.” Lee said, trying to remain calm and cool as possible.
Sonia shook her head. “You’ve got to listen to me, just this once! When I left, he was laying down on the floor. Must’ve fallen asleep… Lee, he’s still there. I can just feel it.”
Her best friend gave her a warm smile, giving her an ice-cream cup. “Just chill. Look… I’ll check it out in a bit, with you, okay? But right now I gotta finish my shift.”
“But—”
“No buts, Sonia.”
“Excuse me?”
A young man with dark-brown hair wearing a red t-shirt under a gray coat walked up to the stand where the teens were.
“What would you like?” asked Lee, offering the man a smile.
Nigel smiled, scratching his hair for a moment. He was going to sound absolutely crazy, but it could work… It could.
EVE.2 was hovering around, doing the best she could to keep out of sight. She scanned everyone who walked by, girls and boys, men and women just to figure out who Nigel Uno and the next Princess were. Suddenly, she heard the voice of a British accent with a young girl. The robot gasped, and hovered to the ice-cream cart, trying to remain calm as possible.
“You see… you’re this… this… Next princess of this Galactic Realm, and—”
Nigel felt a tug on his pants, and looked down. His eyes were focusing right on a small robot with piercing green eyes and an orange-colored body.
“Well, what do you know. A robot… ROBOT!?” Nigel began to freak.
“EVE.2, friend!” EVE.2 introduced herself. She pointed to Nigel. “Nigel Uno—the Searcher!”
Nigel nodded. “Are you helping Princess Rachel?” his voice was gentle. The robot nodded. “Assisting on quest. Location—you. Directive—bringing you to Princess. Next directive; locate new princess.”
“I… I beg your pardon?” Sonia kneeled down to EVE.2, smiling gentleness. EVE.2 scanned her, with Sonia becoming frightened. Lee only watched in fascination. “Whoa…” he murmured. A smile formed onto his lips. “Cool! Really, really cool.”
EVE.2 gasped, with her eyes widening. “NEW DIRECTIVE COMPLETE!” she cried happily, dancing around. She spun, she dived, and she dipped! A graceful dancer, which she was.
“What do you mean?” Nigel questioned, in puzzlement.
EVE.2 pointed in one direction. “Follow me!” she stated with a whistle. “Prin-cess Ra-chel is waiting!”
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“What’s it like, living in the castle?” Zinc asked, curiously.
Rachel giggled, patting his snout. “Well… it’s actually pretty nice. Especially having lots of company over, who happen to be aliens from all over the universe. Like you!”
Zinc smiled a toothy grin. “I’d like to go there one day.”
“Once when the new princess will heal your wing, we’ll go there!” Rachel said, nodding.
“That’s a great idea.” said Zinc, licking her cheek. “Thank you, Princess Rachel!”
“Rachel? Princess Rachel, where are you?”
A familiar British accent filled the room. Rachel’s eyes gotten very hopeful, gleaming in the sunlight. She looked up, and saw the face of Nigel Uno.
The Searcher.
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This is what I have so far, and there's plenty more to come during this chapter! Surprise, Jas! ;D Kuki will be having her baby in the castle, and Inky makes an appearance! Don't forget Zinc, and more action of EVE.2, Sonia, and Lee! ^^
Like I said, this is only half of it. I wanted to put it up to show you guys that I've gained great inspiration back into it! ^^
INKY & EVE.2 rightfull belong to WALLYSCHIKA/RIKA
ZINC & KYRA belong to ME/NLW
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Post by wallysgirl on Apr 17, 2009 17:23:00 GMT -5
 AHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!! What an AWEOME-TASTIC-FAN-TABULOUS SURPRISE!!! ;D Allie, this is SO NICE OF YOU, thank you!!!!! *hugs, SOOPAH GLOMPS* Omg, it was so awesome seeing EVE.2 & Inky in your fanfic!! ^-^ I had to laugh when Poor Inky got scared after seeing Wally & Kuki; but I couldn't help but smile as EVE.2 worked on helping Princess Rachel complete her "directive" ^^ YAY! This really made my day! THANK YOU SO MUCH! *hugs SOOPAH TIGHTLY* I really loved it! And all of it! And YAY, KUKI IS HAVING HER BABY!! Inky: O-oh my! I hope everything will be okay! EVE.2: *chirps* Affirmative, EVE.2 detects happy ending! *spins happily i the air, also swoops down and hugs Allie* *giggleS* Look like Inky & EVE.2 are anxious but excited too! ;D What do you say guys? Inky/EVE.2: Thank you Allie! MAJOR THANKIES! So awesome! And I love your writing style! FABOLOUS JOB! ^^
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Post by Jas on Apr 17, 2009 20:18:51 GMT -5
AHH!! X3!! HOW AWESOME IS THIS!! And how come I missed Allie's previous post?? XD I didn't notice! But this is such a MEGA SOOPAH COOLTASTIC SURPRISE!! ;D ;D ;D Kuki's having her baby, yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay!! X3 Teehee, I LOVED Wally's reaction to it! "*sees Inky* AAAAAAAH!! *sees Kuki* AAAAAAAAHH!! I'm gonna be a dad!!" XDD Soopah awesome! ^^ And ofcourse I would never ever mind if the baby was Koa!! X3 Ohmigad, that'd be so COOL!!  Thanks so much Allie! :3 I can really see the story getting together now! ^^ Things are being explained :3 And the next chapter is predicted to have fluff, yay!! <33 :3 Oooh, I can't wait to read that! ^-^ And I also love Inky's little cameo ^^ *giggles* He's got lots of arms to throw about when he's frightened x3 That was funny! This is great Allie!! *mega glomps* I can't wait to read the finale! :3 |
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Post by CCACorn26 on Apr 18, 2009 12:27:17 GMT -5
Nice work, Allie. I'd say the chapter was worth the time you spent thinking it through. While Nigel and Rachel's destinies are increasingly in sync with each other, Wally and Kuki have a new baby, and no doubt the kingdom is rejoicing. Nigel and Rachel may even be ready to get married in the future, but I have a feeling that Nigel's role as the "Searcher" will become even more important later.
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Post by allie on Apr 18, 2009 14:41:31 GMT -5
Aw, thanks Angel. ^__^ *hugs* I'm glad you liked it! Er... I know this one took a lot of effort for the past few weeks but I promise the last, final chapter will be the fluffiest of them all. ;D
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Post by prettywitchiusaka on Apr 18, 2009 20:49:43 GMT -5
Well I have to say, in spite of waiting for a few weeks, this was defenitly worth the wait.
It was very sweet, romantic, funny, and above all fluffy( something I've come to expect from you). That being said, I can't wait for the finale!
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Post by allie on Apr 19, 2009 8:23:30 GMT -5
Prettywitch! Thank you, Prettywitch! ^^ Thanks a ton, hun. I'm glad you liked the story so far! Now, everybody... In conclusion; allie-twig.deviantart.com/art/GKND-Operation-PRINCESS-ch-9-119775598*dances* I hope everyone has enjoyed the fluff, and the adventure, action, and teamwork of totally awesome alien-galacticness! ^_____^ It was so fun to write! LONG LIVE 1/362! LONG LIVE 3/4 & LEE/SONIA! LONG LIVE GALACTIC KIDS NEXT DOOR! ^^ |
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Post by CCACorn26 on Apr 19, 2009 9:45:15 GMT -5
An excellently fluffy conclusion to an excellent fluffy fanfiction I see right now. I will agree with the enthusiasm for Nigel/Rachel, Wally/Kuki, and Lee/Sonia together, and methinks that everyone else that just as much fun as those six Kids Next Door characters. Now, Nigel and Rachel can go on with establishing their new marriage, bringing peace and joy with them into the future.
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Post by allie on Apr 19, 2009 12:53:59 GMT -5
Thanks so much, Angel! I'm glad you really liked the story. I hope the rest of the PWs enjoy it as much as I do. ^-^ |
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AHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!! What an AWEOME-TASTIC-FAN-TABULOUS SURPRISE!!! ;D
Thanks so much Allie! :3
