Post by allie on May 13, 2009 7:48:22 GMT -5
GKND; Galactic Angel[/i]
-Chapter One (well... half of it)
~**
It was before their eyes. They couldn’t believe it… they just couldn’t! No way.
He landed straight on his stomach, the puddle of blood darkening around him.
“N-Numbuh One…?” Nebulos called out, racing towards him. He gulped, coming across the blood. His antennas were no longer flashing with happiness.
“Nebulos,” Kyra whispered. She reached out to him, but pulled away with her ears lowered. She shook her head, looking at Chad. Her green eyes full of worry for the little blue squirt. “He… he just doesn’t understand. I…”
Chad pulled her into a reassuring hug. “It’s okay… it isn’t your fault.” He whispered, voice cracking. Kyra rested against him, feeling the tears start.
The little alien’s antennas suddenly flashed. The sector gasped along with Chad and Princess Niji.
“H-hey… Numbuh One!” Neb cried happily, kneeling down. He didn’t care about the blood. He didn’t care about any of that. “It’s time to go home…”
Rachel buried her face into her hands, turning away. She couldn’t bear it. Not this… Until she heard a hoarse moan.
“N…N…Nebulos?” a weak Nigel called out. He could hardly lift his head. Nebulos grinned.
“Numbuh One! We were so worried!” he cried, hugging his leader. Nigel shook his head, and ordered for the little one to pull away. Nebulos did so, spreading out his arms.
“C’mon, Numbuh One! Time to go home!” He said.
“I… I’m afraid I won’t be… going with you…” Nigel managed to speak out. Nebulos’s eyes widened, with a frown formed on his face.
“What…? Why? Y-you’re just angry ‘cause the alien got away… r-right?” Nebulos certainly didn’t want to think of this.
Nigel Uno was his hero. He looked up to him, every single day!
“…I’m sorry…” Nigel spoke out, feeling more pain. The alien’s daggers slashed throughout his entire body! “I…I won’t be going with you.”
Nebulos shook his head, furiously. “No…no, you have to!” he cried out. “C’mon, Numbuh One! G-get up!” Nebulos tried his best to push the boy, but all his strength just broke in two.
Nigel only closed his eyes. “Tell Rachel…tell her… I’ll never leave her. I’ll never leave any of you…” he whispered.
Last words.
Nebulos realized he was crying now, and Nigel wasn’t going to return home. He shuddered, and was picked up by Kyra who snuggled him, petting his milk-white hair.
“Shh…” she whispered motherly. Nebulos sobbed into her chest, not knowing when to stop.
He didn’t even think he could stop. Rachel was crying, too. Harder. She was pressed against Zinc, sobbing nonstop. Zinc wrapped his front paws and wings around her, and landed a short nuzzle with his snout in her hair.
He was truly her brother.
And she truly loved Nigel with the depts. of her heart. Zinc knew that for sure.
~**
It's a new GKND story I'm gonna be working on now. I wanted to post it here... I don't know if I'll post it on FF.net/dA this time. It's for you guys, 'cause lots of our characters will be featured in it!
But the plot basically is, Nigel dies from a bloody battle with an adult with razors/curved swords for hands. (I got the idea from re-reading my fic "GKND: Nightmare") And he'll become a guardian angel towards Rachel and Nebulos.
Rachel = Nigel's lover
Nebulos = Like a son, or a little brother. Jas always stated that Neb looked up to Nigel as his hero.
And the Nebulos/Nigel scene... it was inspired by Mufasa's death in TLK. ^^;
I'll need to update more later, hopefully!
Please Read & Review on what you think so far, I'd really love it guys! ^^
EDIT:
Oh! Here are the couples featured-
Nigel/Rachel - Neb/Lun - Chad/Kyra (romance shipping) - Chad/Rachel (Idol shipping, like Maurice/Abby! ^^) Kyra/Neb (mother/son ship) - Zinc/Rachel (bro/sis ship, I always have this "Ship" in my stories!) - Zarzig/Rachel (only for a few minutes... promise.) - Zarzig/Ruby - Infinity/Niji (I want to throw in Inky/Anita if I can, too!
And I'm going to throw in some Kyra/Rachel too, but it's a mother/daughter ship. ^^
EDIT:
I'm thinking of naming the chapters from RAJ's songs. Your Guardian Angel and Time To Let Go are the most inspirational. :3 YGA reminds me of 1/362 so much.
-Chapter One (well... half of it)
~**
It was before their eyes. They couldn’t believe it… they just couldn’t! No way.
He landed straight on his stomach, the puddle of blood darkening around him.
“N-Numbuh One…?” Nebulos called out, racing towards him. He gulped, coming across the blood. His antennas were no longer flashing with happiness.
“Nebulos,” Kyra whispered. She reached out to him, but pulled away with her ears lowered. She shook her head, looking at Chad. Her green eyes full of worry for the little blue squirt. “He… he just doesn’t understand. I…”
Chad pulled her into a reassuring hug. “It’s okay… it isn’t your fault.” He whispered, voice cracking. Kyra rested against him, feeling the tears start.
The little alien’s antennas suddenly flashed. The sector gasped along with Chad and Princess Niji.
“H-hey… Numbuh One!” Neb cried happily, kneeling down. He didn’t care about the blood. He didn’t care about any of that. “It’s time to go home…”
Rachel buried her face into her hands, turning away. She couldn’t bear it. Not this… Until she heard a hoarse moan.
“N…N…Nebulos?” a weak Nigel called out. He could hardly lift his head. Nebulos grinned.
“Numbuh One! We were so worried!” he cried, hugging his leader. Nigel shook his head, and ordered for the little one to pull away. Nebulos did so, spreading out his arms.
“C’mon, Numbuh One! Time to go home!” He said.
“I… I’m afraid I won’t be… going with you…” Nigel managed to speak out. Nebulos’s eyes widened, with a frown formed on his face.
“What…? Why? Y-you’re just angry ‘cause the alien got away… r-right?” Nebulos certainly didn’t want to think of this.
Nigel Uno was his hero. He looked up to him, every single day!
“…I’m sorry…” Nigel spoke out, feeling more pain. The alien’s daggers slashed throughout his entire body! “I…I won’t be going with you.”
Nebulos shook his head, furiously. “No…no, you have to!” he cried out. “C’mon, Numbuh One! G-get up!” Nebulos tried his best to push the boy, but all his strength just broke in two.
Nigel only closed his eyes. “Tell Rachel…tell her… I’ll never leave her. I’ll never leave any of you…” he whispered.
Last words.
Nebulos realized he was crying now, and Nigel wasn’t going to return home. He shuddered, and was picked up by Kyra who snuggled him, petting his milk-white hair.
“Shh…” she whispered motherly. Nebulos sobbed into her chest, not knowing when to stop.
He didn’t even think he could stop. Rachel was crying, too. Harder. She was pressed against Zinc, sobbing nonstop. Zinc wrapped his front paws and wings around her, and landed a short nuzzle with his snout in her hair.
He was truly her brother.
And she truly loved Nigel with the depts. of her heart. Zinc knew that for sure.
~**
It's a new GKND story I'm gonna be working on now. I wanted to post it here... I don't know if I'll post it on FF.net/dA this time. It's for you guys, 'cause lots of our characters will be featured in it!
But the plot basically is, Nigel dies from a bloody battle with an adult with razors/curved swords for hands. (I got the idea from re-reading my fic "GKND: Nightmare") And he'll become a guardian angel towards Rachel and Nebulos.
Rachel = Nigel's lover
Nebulos = Like a son, or a little brother. Jas always stated that Neb looked up to Nigel as his hero.
And the Nebulos/Nigel scene... it was inspired by Mufasa's death in TLK. ^^;
I'll need to update more later, hopefully!
Please Read & Review on what you think so far, I'd really love it guys! ^^
EDIT:
Oh! Here are the couples featured-
Nigel/Rachel - Neb/Lun - Chad/Kyra (romance shipping) - Chad/Rachel (Idol shipping, like Maurice/Abby! ^^) Kyra/Neb (mother/son ship) - Zinc/Rachel (bro/sis ship, I always have this "Ship" in my stories!) - Zarzig/Rachel (only for a few minutes... promise.) - Zarzig/Ruby - Infinity/Niji (I want to throw in Inky/Anita if I can, too!
And I'm going to throw in some Kyra/Rachel too, but it's a mother/daughter ship. ^^
EDIT:
I'm thinking of naming the chapters from RAJ's songs. Your Guardian Angel and Time To Let Go are the most inspirational. :3 YGA reminds me of 1/362 so much.