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Post by allie on May 15, 2009 15:19:14 GMT -5
It's okay. He's a good guy who only tries to romance Rachel, AKA wanting her to "move on with her love-life". But Rachel wants to stay-put... because... well... Spoiler; Nigel visits her by being in her dreams. ^^ Yay! And she doesn't want to let him go, and in her dreams... her dreams do come true when he's with her. And soon there will be a gihugic attack on the GKND by the adulthood disease hot on their trail, on a planet... Think of the D-Reaper in Digimon Tamers, but blue-ish. Rachel = Jeri, Nebulos = Calumon, Tiger; the Guardian (Nigel/Zinc) = Gallantmon (Takato/Zinc) But I'm afraid that the next chapter will be delayed for a while guys, sorry. I need to get to bed very early tonight and get up at 4 in the morning. I'm leaving at 5:00 AM to attend to Kentucky Kingdom and won't be back until 10 at night. XD
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Post by prettywitchiusaka on May 15, 2009 16:10:12 GMT -5
Oh, I see. I apreciate Zarzig trying to help her move on, but I think it might be a little too early to try and help her move on and what not. That's not your fault though, that's the fault of the character.
Aww! That sounds very sweet. It seems to me like we'll expecting your usual bount fo fluffiness.
Really? That sounds awesome that you're going to put in Digimon Tamer influences. I can't wait to see what you do with that.
Oh yeah, I remember you talking about that. But what can you do when you're busy, right?
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Post by Jas on May 15, 2009 18:41:45 GMT -5
I just read Chapter Two! It was still a little sad, I was happy that it ended all fluffy like that ^^ And it's good to see Nigel alive again! Well, so to speak ofcourse ^^ He's not gone, yay! n__n It was also very sweet how Nebulos was trying to cheer up Lunira :3 That's definitely something he'd do ^^ He's probably quite upset, but has to make sure she feel okay =) Nice job, Allie! ^-^ I can't wait to see what happens next! But first you have to go to Kentucky Kingdom ofcourse! *giggles* ^^ Have tons of fun!! *glomps*
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Post by allie on May 16, 2009 21:17:10 GMT -5
WE GOT A FIRST SUPERIOR! WE GOT A FIRST SUPERIOR!!! *is very happy!* ... But we have to mix it with the Show Chior, since we had no one to compete against. ^^; But still... HURRAY!!! ^^ *cheers* I'm gonna be dreamin' up the third chapter tonight, and try to get up in the morning to write it up! I promise! *salute* ... Pssst, I bought a cute little kitty-angel plushy while I was in the Looney Tunes' Gift Shop. >///< 'Tis so cute, I had to buy it immediately to remind me of Guardian Nigel!
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Post by CCACorn26 on May 16, 2009 23:55:24 GMT -5
Um... of course. Congratulations with your award, lead Starlight Soldier, and hopefully, you will have pleasant dreams of Nigel and Rachel's romantic friendship going forward. Have fun typing your third chapter, and we'll look forward to it once it's ready to post.
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Post by allie on May 17, 2009 10:11:50 GMT -5
Thank you so much! ^^ I'm glad. Here's bit of a snippet of chapter 3; still working on it! ~ ~ ~ ~ ~
The fist went straight down onto the desk. The blonde teenager’s teeth grit, and ignored the pain of the beating.
“Stupid… just stupid.”
The young female alien was at his side, holding two cups of her special recipe coco in hands. “No… It isn’t stupid.” She said. Chad glared up at her, teeth were still gritting.
“Yes. Yes, it is! You know it is, Kyra. Don’t be in denial of it. It’s been a few days now, I know, but come on! Rachel’s smarter than that. Feeling Nigel Uno WITH her? How? How is that possible?” Chad barked with a shake of his head. He took the cup of hot coco and took a sip, hoping the calm down after a while.
Kyra’s ears perked, clearing her throat. “I’ve heard of you humans talk.” She stated. A smile appeared on her lips. “Numbuh One actually may be watching her from the heavens above now. She’s very lucky to have him.”
A calm sigh escaped her, looking to the ceiling. Her ears perked again, and looked to Chad. “…Chad?” her concerned tone of voice asked. Kyra suddenly gasped, with her hand covering her mouth.
He was crying. Chad, Numbuh 274 -- One of the best KND operatives from Earth like a 'Mister Tough Guy' was actually crying. He let the tears fall, and shuddered.
"The stupid kid..." he murmured to himself. "Acting like a hero. A big-shot, a champion! Why'd you have to do it, kid? Why'd you have to step forward into the beyond?"
Suddenly he felt a gentle hand take his own, and looked up with tears in his eyes. Kyra was standing there by his side, and both of her hands squeezed his own. His eyes widened, and the teenager felt he was blushing hot.
"It... it's not your fault," stammered Kyra, closing in on him. She pulled him into a hug, nuzzling his shoulder. "Numbuh One did this on his own. He wanted to save us." she stated with a nod.
Chad looked to her. She smiled, wiping his tears away with her thumb. More tears leaked.
"...But why?" he managed to whisper out.
"Because," Kyra said, snuggling with him closer in the hug. "It's his destiny."
~**
It was dark in the halls near Chad’s office, with some serious eavesdropping.
“Neb, please! Turn out of the night-light before somebody notices!” Lunira whispered. Nebulos gasped, and turned it out.
“S-sorry, Lun.” He apologized, fidgeting with his arms. “I...err…” He wanted to find the right things to say, on why he wanted to listen on into Kyra and Chad’s conversation.
“E-e-excuse me, operatives?” called out an extremely shy voice. Nebulos and Lunira turned their heads, seeing Inky popping his head out of Numbuh Infinity’s office.
“Numbuh 8-T!” they said in unison, running towards him.
The alien octopus gasped, tripping all over his tentacles when Neb&Lun entered the office.
“Oh-oh-oh my!” stuttered a surprised Inky. His bowl of water was shaking all over the place, and closed the door behind him.
“We need to speak with Infinity, please.” said Lunira.
“I think he’s still up, would you like for m-me to get him for you?” asked Inky with a smile.
“Yes, please!” Nebulos cried.
Inky hurried away to get Numbuh Infinity and tell him guests have arrived for a midnight talk. Just when he was about to return, Princess Niji floated into the room.
“Nebulos, Lunira! Why… (yawn) are you here so late, little ones?” the princess asked tiredly. Her rainbows were getting much rest, and were nearly finished with repair.
“Princess!” they said together, and bowed.
Niji giggled, waving it off. “It’s alright. Just tell us why you’re here so late. Is it urgent?” she asked with a sleepy smile.
Nebulos nodded, taking Lunira by the hand. “Well… kinda,” he said, with a roll of his eyes, pondering what to speak of next. “Numbuh 274 and Kyra are doin’ some serious talking.”
Niji raised an eyebrow, and crossed her arms. “You weren’t…. spying on them, were you?” she asked, her tone a little stern but kind.
Lunira blushed red as Nebulos blushed bright violet.
“Well…?”
“It has to do something with Numbuh One, Princess Niji.” Lunira stated with a sad smile. The alien princess dropped her arms to her sides, and gasped.
“O-oh…” she whispered to herself. “Forgive me, go on in.” She led them to Infinity’s office door from the “waiting room”. Three small knocks and a voice said clearly and kindly.
“Come in!”
It was Infinity’s voice, all right.
Princess Niji opened the door, towards Infinity. “You have visitors, Jamal.” She said, setting down beside his desk. The supreme leader blushed lightly as she mentioned his real name.
“Thank you, Princess.” He said with a smile. He adjusted his shades, and looked straight, but didn’t see anyone!
“Oh-oh, Infinity, sir!” Inky whispered loudly. He pointed his index tentacle as a “jabbing-thumb-down”; meaning the visitors were very small, and couldn’t look to him at his own height, even if he was sitting in his chair.
“Ah, so we do have visitors!” Infinity exclaimed with a clap of his hands. “What brings the two of you here at this time of night? Isn’t it passed your bedtimes?”
Nebulos chuckled, and nodded his head. “It is, sir. But we gotta speak with you!” he said. Infinity smiled, clasping his hands together.
~** Just a bit of the third chapter. :3 Mwahaha, Neb & Lun listening to Chad and Kyra's discussion. XD
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Post by Jas on May 18, 2009 5:28:58 GMT -5
Teehee, the squirts are good at eavesdropping! x3 They make excellent spies! *giggles* Nice one Allie! ^-^ I see you also put in the "Kyra Cocoa" concept here That's nice! :3 Good job! *glomps*
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Post by prettywitchiusaka on May 18, 2009 8:00:30 GMT -5
Hehe, looks like Chad does care about Nigel after all. As always, I can't wait to read the rest of the chapter once you get it up.
BTW, I know this might seem odd, but for some reason I keep picturing Inky with Maxwell's voice( Maxwell from Hamtaro I mean).
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Post by CCACorn26 on May 18, 2009 9:12:00 GMT -5
While Chad and Kyra are conversing about Nigel's demise, Nebulos and Lunira have been eavesdropping -- and they managed to catch some "news" about Rachel. I imagine that Numbuh Infinity will be pleasantly puzzled if what Nebulos and Lunira end up telling him is true, but I trust that we'll wait and see.
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Post by allie on May 18, 2009 16:32:53 GMT -5
Thanks, guys! Here's the rest of chapter three; I've decided for Rachel and Zarzig's "date" to be in the next chapter, though... I hope that's okay. ^^; ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Galactic Angel[/i] - - - Chapter 3- Midnight Meetings (rest) ~**
“Well, what do you need to speak with me about, Nebulos?” the leader asked.
Nebulos and Lunira looked at each other, and took a deep breath together before explaining what they heard from Chad and Kyra about Rachel.
“Numbuh 274 says that Rachel feels Numbuh One with her!” cried Nebulos, expanding all four of his arms. He burst into happiness. “I knew it! He’s all with us. Didn’t I say before?”
Lunira smiled more as she saw him so happy, and so enthusiastic about Nigel being with them, even if he was dead. “But then… Chad busted out crying, and Kyra comforted him.” Her smile faded away, forming into a little frown.
Infinity lowered his eyebrows, and sighed.
“It seems that all of us, even the biggest operatives miss him terribly.” He said, feeling as if he was to cry, too.
Niji put a hand on his shoulder, with a reassuring smile to Infinity.
“But it wasn’t your fault, Jamal.” She said softly. “It was no one’s.”
“T-that’s r-r-right!” Inky said. His frown was large, and tried not to ink himself as he cried.
“The operatives are my responsibility, Princess.” Infinity said. “If anything were to happen to them…I…” He then shook his head, and laid his head in the palm of his hand, crying softly and trying hard to think it over.
“Oh Jamal… we all miss Nigel.” whispered Niji, pulling him into a hug. She tightened her grip around him as Infinity sobbed lightly into her shoulder.
“But who will be Rachel’s protector now?” Lunira asked, eyes were still full of hope. “Numbuh One promised her that he would always protect her, he even committed it to her father a while back!”
“He’s still with her.” Nebulos said determinedly, eyes narrowing.
“H-how is that even possible, Neb?” Inky asked, scratching his bowl with a tentacle.
The little blue alien’s antennas happily flashed, and pointed all four of his index fingers to the ceiling.
“…In the ceiling?” Niji said, raising an eyebrow. Infinity blew his nose in his handkerchief, and laughed quietly. He wiped the few last of his tears away, chuckling.
“N-no, my dear Princess!” he said with a slight stammer of words. “What Nebulos means is that Numbuh One is in heaven, watching over Numbuh 362. He’s protecting her up there.” He then jabbed a thumb out the window, which led to the universe, high, high up!
“Oh my…” Niji smiled, cupping her hands together. “Do you think he’s having all sorts of fun up there, too?”
“Perhaps.” said Infinity. “But he’ll be on duty for quite a while, I assure.”
“A-as Rachel’s g-g-guardian a-a-angel?” Inky blushed lightly, smiling more. “Yes!” Infinity and Niji cried together happily.
“He’s still alive in our hearts.” Nebulos said with a gentle flash of his antennas. “B-but Numbuh Infinity, do you really think Numbuh One’s following Rachel around?”
Infinity sternly looked at his desk, and looked to them. “I’m supposing so,” he said, “He’ll be watching her very… closely tomorrow.”
Nebulos, Lunira, Inky and Princess Niji nervously glanced to one another.
“What do you mean, Jamal?” asked Niji with curiosity.
“From what I’ve heard around the base… Zarzig… asked Rachel out on a date.” Infinity murmured clearly, but lowly for only the four of them to hear.
Whoa, whoa, whoa, STOP! Hold it, dude! Back up there for a minute, will you Infinity?
Zarzig… asks… Rachel. ON A DATE! She accepted? ACCEPTED? How and WHY in the GALACTICALLY-CRUD would this young girl accept to be in the clutches of a red, buggy-eyed creep—especially when his Numbuh was R666 AND had a curly devil tail? Tell that to your Earth KND diplomats, dude!
“Zarzig only wants to spend a little time with her.” Infinity revealed the shocking news to the surprised alien operatives. “To try to let Rachel have a good time, doing something nice for her.”
“But Numbuh One—” Nebulos protested, until Infinity cut him off by raising his hand in the air.
“Please, Nebulos.” The supreme leader pleaded. “Rachel needs this. It will do her some good.”
Nebulos and Lunira frowned to each other, sighing in defeat.
“Okay…”
“Good.” Infinity gave a smile, and stood up from his chair. “But if there’s anything up between those two… if she starts to feel uncomfortable around Zarzig, you know what to do.”
The sly Jamaican gave a wink, and then stretched. “Well now,” he said. “I think it’s time for we all head to bed, shouldn’t we?”
Lunira and Nebulos blushed, rubbing the back of their heads. “Oh, oh yes sir!” they said together with a squirt-soldier salute. Infinity only chuckled, and scooted them off.
“Come along, Princess. I bet you want some shut-eye, too?” Infinity inquired, offering his arm. Niji giggled, taking his arm with her hand. She laid her head on his shoulder, feeling the fabric of his neat suit.
“Yes…I-I am.” She said, still tired. She yawned lightly, and when Infinity saw it, he yawned back. He smiled, resting his chin in her hair for a moment.
“Well…I’ll take you back to your Royal sector,” the boy offered. He then kissed her forehead, and looked to Inky.
“Numbuh 8-T.”
Inky gasped, and looked up from his seat. He nearly squirted all over his papers. “Y-y-yes, Numbuh Infinity, sir?”
“You’re dismissed, my friend.” instructed Infinity with a simple smile.
Inky gasped again, but this time very happy to know he was released from work. “Oh, oh, oh thank you, sir!” He saluted, with a small nod and gathered the papers up, stacking them onto Infinity’s desk for the morning after.
He said goodnight, and left the office to return to his room where he shared with his best friend, Anita.
Princess Niji was soundly sleeping on Infinity’s shoulder. The leader snickered, pulled the princess into his arms as a ‘bridal’ style, and continued his way to the Royal Sector.
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Post by wallysgirl on May 18, 2009 23:01:23 GMT -5
Nigel's watching over her from above. ^-^ The wonderful thing about Gaurdian Angels is that they gaurds you for infinity and beyond. *nods* And it's so awesome that the aliens are slowly understanding that in your fic Allie.
Oh, and Inky was very much in character. ^^ Thank you for adding him! I really appreciate it! "*MEGA SOOPAH GIHUGIC GLOMPS you* And everyone was so united in this chapter too! I also love how you portrayed Nebulos! ^-^
I can't wait for the next chappie!
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Post by Renee on May 18, 2009 23:32:04 GMT -5
Aw, I just love the way you write Allie! The story is coming out really sweet, and Nigel will always be with them watching. I love that. ^^ I also love how you've kept them all in character despite the sad circumstances, and the Infiniji fluff is adorable too! ;D
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Post by allie on May 19, 2009 7:18:08 GMT -5
Thank you, thank you, THANK YOU! ^^ Here's the beginning of Chapter 4, I was so excited to type it, I wanted to put it on here; tell me what you think! :3
It mostly stars Nigel, Rachel, and Zarzig.... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Galactic Angel[/i] - - - Chapter 4- Dating Disasters! ~**
The next day had arrived—the day of the… Date. Rachel truly didn’t want to go, but she didn’t want to hurt Zarzig.
Sure, she actually did care for him, but she didn’t like-like him. She only wished that they were only good friends, nothing more. Yet Ruby hissed at her twice yesterday. And Rachel definitely knew why.
Ruby was now alone without a boy in her life. First Nigel and now Zarzig will do anything to date Rachel once the Galactic Hero was out of the picture!
She had gone sour, more than ever. That Ruby. But maybe one day she’ll finally learn to gain a true heart like Rachel and the others. Zarzig on the other hand didn’t do too hot, either…
Rachel was trying to find something to wear, though.
In yet, she completely had NO idea that a guardian from a small cloud was watching over her. Indeed, Nigel was watching her closely as she worked. He continued to gaze at the clothing Rachel had on her bed. There weren’t many choices, but it’s the thought that counts.
“She should really go with what she normally wears in my opinion.” Nigel said to himself, crossing his arms. “… Zarzig’s really lucky.” And then, his eyebrows furrowed. He scratched his hair, and shook his head.
“I hope he doesn’t plan anything big today… Or I’ll swoop down and take’em to Heck!” Nigel giggled playfully, resting down on the cloud. “Oh Nigel Uno, you smooth tiger you…”
“Tiger, should I wear this?”
Nigel’s eyes shot open. Was she actually talking to HIM? Did she SEE him? Nigel turned on his cloud, and saw that Rachel was looking at a picture of him.
He suddenly got an idea. He hovered down from his cloud, and walked over. The angel smiled, and whispered into Rachel’s ear.
“No, no. I think you’ll do amazing what you’re already in, Rachel.”
There was a short pause, until Rachel spoke. Nigel stepped back, respecting. “…I-I think I’ll just wear my usual clothes.” She said to herself. She smiled, putting her hand upon the glass and frame of Nigel’s picture. It was only a gentle touch.
“If only there was some way…” Nigel sighed with a shake of his head. “No… no, no. Nigel Uno, you cannot use it. It would be too dangerous, and what could be worse? The girl of your dreams being sucked away into the most GIHUGIC-EST nightmare ever!”
He then thought it over again, and bowed his head. “If anything goes wrong… if Zarzig does ONE thing to make her unhappy… Then, I’ll use it.”
Angels had the power of visiting their loved ones in their dreams. Even Nigel was only a rookie; he wanted to make his loved one happy.
He needed to make all of them happy.
He continued watching Rachel getting ready, and heard knocking from the main door of the sector.
Rachel sighed for a moment. She glanced to Nigel’s picture again, cupping her hands. “Please… please don’t take this the wrong way,” she pleaded. “It’s only soda… he’s only being nice to me, after…” her voice broke, and was afraid she would start crying all over again.
The girl gathered her courage, and walked out of her room to greet Zarzig. Nigel followed, floating on his cloud.
“Rachel… I would never take it the wrong way…” he whispered with a gentle smile. “You truly deserve to be happy. If… Zarzig actually gives it to you… or anyone else…”
He was even about to tear up himself. He then realized... that He wasn't The One anymore to make Rachel happy.
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Post by Jas on May 19, 2009 10:13:53 GMT -5
This is such great stuff Allie!! ;D And I can't help but be reminded of All Dogs Go to Heaven ^^ *giggles* Which was also a wonderful movie! I really liked Nebulos in the third chapter :3 It was cute how he was pointing to the above. I can imagine that Nigel or Rachel once explained to him what a Guardian Angel is, and that he beliefs that Nigel turned into one ^^ That's very into character! I also like how he refused to believe that Numbuh One is just gone, that's very sweet. And Inky was so cute and funny! *giggles* x3 Very ilke him! I'm really liking this! ^w^ I'm curious to see where it'll be going! Keep it up!! *MEGA glomps* ^-^
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Post by CCACorn26 on May 19, 2009 12:25:28 GMT -5
While Rachel prepares for her date with Zarzig, Nigel is attempting to figure out what to do, no doubt being certain to keep an eye on Zarzig in the process. Nice new chapter, as ever, Allie.
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