operation: R.E.V.A.N.G.E. (My first fanfic)

[anni.a.p.3]

This is my first fanficcion ever, so comment please what do you think please,

Oh and is you want a summary is this:
Sally have a problem because someone domine the future, so she take help from the past. The 2 generations before her`s of sector V, Sally is the new numbuh 3,000 and her mom (Kuki`s daughter) is numbuh 300. Wally was nervious and he really want to know who`s the future Kuki`s husband after she asked Sally. And the person who dominate the world of the future is... well, you`ll discover reading ;D
------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ transmiting mision for KND Kids Next Door operation:
R.E.V.A.N.G.E.

R.are

E.nemy without

V.alour

A.ttack

N.ew

G.eneration

E.very where
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Is a normal day for the sector V, all of them watching TV, until, a big light invade the room. After the light finish shine, appears Sally
Sally-I need help!

Kuki- Who are you?

Sally-Sally, the Kuki`s grand daughter

Nigel asked her what`s the problem,

Sally-Is a boy, he is wired and is mad, he domine all the kids and now the children are slave of adults and for a scary reason he have stubble

when she said that, Wally know of who are she talking.

4- Negative 4! but, how does he scape from the brocoli mine?

1- If is him, I think there`s only one way that he could go.

They go to the ruins of Madame Margaret`s castle. They go in the C.O.O.L.B.U.S. (or something like that, honestly I don`t remember the name of the ship as a bus) During the travel Wally was desesperate because Kuki and Sally (that are sitting each other) were sitting back him so, he was listen all the questions that Kuki don`t stop asking to Sally, questions as...

3-How many sons I`m gonna have?!

Sally- 2, 1 boy and a girl, the girl is my mommy.

3-wow, and what`s your mom`s name?

Sally-Annie

3- awsome! and who is my husband? Do I know him jet? What his name?

Wally put attention when he listen te last question, he put nervious.

Sally- Is...

A ship`s sound interrupt. they touch down.

1- Get out guys.

When they arrive they see the castle in perfect conditions.

2: What`s the...

1: Ok, we need to find the future machine, let`s disperce, 2 with 4, 3 with Sally and numbuh 5 with me. Let`s go!

During the travelling numbuh 4 was asking himself what could be the Sally`s answer. He was really afraid. 3 and Sally scream

3/Sally- We found it!

All the kids run where they are, the future machine was in perfect conditions.

1- Is true, in one way negative numbuh 4 scape from the brocoli mine and from his world, he find this and he go to the future.

5-And with all the intelligence that he had he could repare the machine.

4- Hey, what does that mean?!

2- Ok, let`s go to your time Sally.

Sally-Yes, but we first need help from the sector V, not you, after you, I mean my mom and my oncle when they were kids.

1- The most help we had better.

They activate the future machine in 25 years later and they go.


END OF CHAPTER ONE.
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If you have sugerences or opinions I happy accept them

[anni.a.p.3]

The last chapter was named: Who`s Sally`s grandpa`s?
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CHAPTER 2 Annie and Colly

They appear in their city 25 years after. All was normal.

1-Ok, let`s find a knd operative to ask for the sector V of these time.

5- I see one girl with a S.P.L.A.N.K. she could be a KND opperative.

They follow her until a narrow street. She felt down. The girl turn to stand up and in front of her the Nigel`s shoes, she look up and see all the kids.

Girl- I can’t believe it, you are the sector V from 2006-2012. Am I dreaming? You are adults now.

Sally said to Kuki in secret- She is my mom!

Kuki - (screaming) Is your mom?

Girl- What?

Sally- Are you numbuh 300?

Girl- Yes, why, who are you? Why does the sector V from the past are here?

Nigel- We`re from the past, exept she (indicate Sally, Sally move her hand as saying hi) she`s from the future. Listen... we have a problem and as numbuh 3 said she is your mother in this time, we need help and so we came here for contact your teammaters for save the future of negative numbuh 4, an enemy of us. Are you with me?

Girl- Let me present, I`m Annie, and don’t problem, I will help you.

She goes thru a wall of the narrow street and press a buttom, then she said "300 rainbow monkeys super dupper hug" a door open.

Annie- Come on!

They go stairs down

4- So, are you the daughter of numbuh 3?

Annie- yes,

4- And where is your mother now? I mean the adult.

Annie- In home.

4- Oh, and your father?

Annie- Too.
4- Great, and what is your last name?

Annie- Do you want to know who`s my father?

4- No, no, no, no. I-I-I only w-want to know y-your last name.

Annie- (Sarcastic) Sure. My last name is… Oh, we arrive.

They finish in one door of the three house.

Annie- These is the sector V, well the new one. Numbuh 246 (our lider) numbuh 299 (our scientific) I continue, numbuh 450 (my best friend) and my big Colly, numbuh 436 or as I named brother

Annie, Sally and the Sector V (1, 2,3,4, and 5) explain them all. They accept and they go to the future. The future has the sky dark purple and cloudy. The city was alone, no one there.

2- These are the future?

Sally- (sad) yes, but all is because of him. 4 months before these pleace was different.

Sally and the rest go to a place down a tree, when there was a a lot of kids planning revolution. Sally presents their team-mates, numbuh 1000, 2009 (her cousin Connie). 4500,5900, and her. Then, the leader of the ressistence is speaking his plan.

Leader- Look, this is the plan, when the group A formed by the sectors from A to K attack, the group B that is formed from the sectors L to Y and our new friends, the sectors V from 2 generations back, Welcome, you`ll go to the back part of the castle and go directly to the negative 4`s room and make him our prissioner!!!

All the people clamp exept the sector O, that looks very unhappy. Nigel look them and suspect about them. That night (when the plan start being operating) all happen such as they want, exept when they appear in the negative 4`s room because the sector O betray the rest and tell to the enemies their plans, so negative 4 wasn`t alone, he was with a lot of his soldiers that take the sector V, L, N, R, S, T, and W.

Negative4- Look what I have here! Is the sector V from my time.

1- What are you doing here? How do you scape from the broccoli mine?

Negative 4- Well, I suborn a DNK operative with a reppiy (yipper) card, and let me go. Later, I go away from my negative world and I meet a girl named Margarette and when we were talking, we discovered that our worst enemy was you, the sector V. After that, she show me her destroyed castle and her destroyed time machine, and we did a deal, that I will repair and be the king of the world in the future if the girls rich with me, repair the machine, I betray her. (he go to his soldiers) And Now, take the prisoners to the jail of the mansion .

The rest of the sectors could scape. In the jail that our sector V were, they listen a voice that said...

“Are you the sector V from the 2009? I’m from that time.”

All turn to see who’s that voice is, and they see Margarette.

4- What are you doing here cruddy girl?

Margarette- I`m not cruddy! And I`m here because... well negative numbuh 4. I only accept work with him because both want revenge of all of you for destroy our dream of girls reaching the world and that he can`t be the leader of the DNK doing miserable the life of the kids in his world, but now I only want revenge in him.

4-How much time you were on this jail?

Margarette- about 2 or 3 weeks.

4- Oh, (in secret to Margarette) and do you know who`s the numbuh 3 husband?

Margarette- No, why?

4- Forgot it.

5- Well, we need to think what do we do for getting out of here!

2-Don`t worry, say hi to…

COMPUTER
C.A.M.U.F.L.A.G.E. of the kids next door.

C.ool
A. and
M. achine
U.ses
F. or
L. et you go
A. way only in
G. aigant
Emergency
( I don`t have imagination for do something like that, but these machine can do holograms of you, meanwhile is doing a hole to scape)

1- great! Activate.

They scape.

3- And now, where do we go?

1- With the KND and explain them about the sector O.

They go, but in they never noticed that negative numbuh 4 was on the window sawing them go away.