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Jun 12, 2009 22:19:13 GMT -5
Post by CCACorn26 on Jun 12, 2009 22:19:13 GMT -5
Nigel and Rachel as Pongo and Perdita, eh? I have a strange feeling you're going to enjoy this, as ever. Given what I've been tracking over the past few weeks, I'm not[/b][/u] complaining about this latest one-shot idea of yours.
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Jun 19, 2009 11:01:49 GMT -5
Post by allie on Jun 19, 2009 11:01:49 GMT -5
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Jun 19, 2009 11:46:39 GMT -5
Post by CCACorn26 on Jun 19, 2009 11:46:39 GMT -5
(sweatdropping) It would seem that you've been able to conjure up a new fairy tale one-shot featuring Nigel and Rachel's romance. After his younger brother turned him into a dragon, Nigel fled his kingdom... only to fall for Rachel. Unfortunately, after wondering what might become of his new love interest, Nigel -- at least in his dragon form -- dies, but very fortunately, he and Rachel get together in the end. Overall, nice work.
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Jun 19, 2009 20:02:27 GMT -5
Post by prettywitchiusaka on Jun 19, 2009 20:02:27 GMT -5
Hi Allie. I just read your recent story, and since you haven't made a thread for it in teh fanfiction section, I figured I might as well post my review here.
First of all, I think I've figured out the fairytale that inspired you. It's Beauty and The Beast, correct?
Second, I really liked this story. It was very sweet yet at the same time quite funny I thought. I especially enjoyed the scenes of Rachel and Nigel meeting and Rachel crying over Nigel's dead body. They were so sweet I couldn't help but keep visualizing them in my head.
Third, I have eight words to say. Abby-being-the-Pool-of-Visions-was-AWESOME!
And finally, although you described Rachel as wearing a read cloak, for some reason I kept visualizing her wearing a light purple dress with a fushia cloak.
Overall, I thought it was a great one-shot!
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Jun 19, 2009 22:33:08 GMT -5
Post by CCACorn26 on Jun 19, 2009 22:33:08 GMT -5
Beauty and the Beast? I'm reminded of a YouTube video compiled by one DestinyInevitable18.: YouTube: DestinyInevitable18: Beauty and the BritLet me see: Nigel is the Beast, and Rachel is, well, Belle. Nigel and Rachel might very well overcome their uncertainty in this video, a happy ending, I would think, for the Courting Commanders/Starlight Soldiers.
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Jun 19, 2009 23:17:02 GMT -5
Post by allie on Jun 19, 2009 23:17:02 GMT -5
Thanks, guys! Wow, I can't believe that that video is still up! That's from way back in 2007, when there was lots of Courting Commanders on the KND Forum. We had so many projects that kept us busy with 1/362ness. ^^ *sigh* I miss those days a lot, but oh well! But the original plot of Beauty & The Beast, the original fairytale I used for inspiration. Instead of holding Rachel captive in his castle, Nigel asked if he would like to see it; and there was no "Gaston" in the original story, either. But if there was one... I was thinking Zarzig because of his stalky-ness and smoothieness with Rachel. xP But he'd probably end up marrying Ruby in the end, hehe! ^^ Maybe I'll have more 1/362 fairytales in the future! I sure hope so. I've actually may re-write The Princess Bride, since that's one of my favorite fairytale books/movies EVER. ;D I've wrote the 1/362 verisons of Princess, B&tB... I'll probably end up writing a Cinderella-one like, too. :3 Also I still need to finish Love Story! x3 That was inspired by... well, Love Story by Taylor Swift. And... can any of you point out which other fairytale a happened to swipe-into the oneshot? Just don't take a look the comments, I want you to focus carefully! ;D I know that fairytale isn't really 1/362, but I couldn't help myself. I just love the scene and where she screams. EDIT: Oh my I've got more fairytale ideas... I must jot them all down!
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Jun 20, 2009 11:27:41 GMT -5
Post by CCACorn26 on Jun 20, 2009 11:27:41 GMT -5
Zarzig as Gaston to Nigel's Beast and Rachel's Belle? That might work if Zarzig seeks Rachel for himself, but everything should work out well with him and Ruby in the end. I'm sure that Nigel and Rachel will do no less well in whatever fairy tale scenarios you devise, lead Courting Commander, extending their romantic friendship toward the future.
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Jun 21, 2009 10:42:03 GMT -5
Post by allie on Jun 21, 2009 10:42:03 GMT -5
Don't you mean by 'Starlight Searcher'? ^^ Heh. (I wanna be honest, I actually think... 'Searcher' is better than 'Soldier' but that's just my opinion.) Um... hi! :3 Just got back from the Farm, and I just may have an idea for a little Father's Day oneshot for Numbuh One. (actually he'll be an adult in the fic! ^^ With him, Elijah, Rachel, Randi, Monty, exc!)
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Jun 21, 2009 11:38:13 GMT -5
Post by CCACorn26 on Jun 21, 2009 11:38:13 GMT -5
Hmm... "Starlight Soldier" may be more effective in communicating Nigel and Rachel's basic personalities within the Galactic Kids Next Door as they maintain their determination to help kids across the universe, keeping in mind everything they've learned as commanders in the original Kids Next Door. Of course, they might have some key bonding time handy with Monty for this Father's Day, and I trust that you will be eager to devise such a story.
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Jun 21, 2009 12:05:45 GMT -5
Post by allie on Jun 21, 2009 12:05:45 GMT -5
Thanks! ^^ Well, we could always suggest a poll! If that's alright with you and the PWs I mean. But I've developed more into the oneshot... um... I hope people won't kill me next for this; Rachel will give birth to her and Nigel's third chid, little Trina Uno, and... Rachel will die in childbirth, and the next day is Father's Day. I know it sounds very depressing, but I think I got the idea from a very old oneshot by an awesome 1/362 shipper named Husk who wrote a oneshot of Nigel and his daughter visiting Rachel's grave. (not sure how she died, though ^^; ) But it was so teary, but so beautiful. I want to do something like that... and Nigel will promise Rachel up in heaven with all his heart that he will do everything he can to take care of their children. I bet Zinc and Zoey would fly by to help out, hehe. But I don't want it to be too sad... I want it to be happy, with Rachel as an angel watching Nigel and her children from Heaven. ^-^
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Jun 22, 2009 9:10:29 GMT -5
Post by CCACorn26 on Jun 22, 2009 9:10:29 GMT -5
Hmm... Maybe Rachel had some sort of terminal illness that very fortunately spared Trina. I can imagine Nigel carrying that baby in his arms gently as he and his two other children look solemnly upward, wondering if Rachel's watching them right now. With a new moment of realization -- and reassurance from Rachel -- Nigel will then look down at his family, then step forward, ready to face the world.
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Jun 24, 2009 21:11:32 GMT -5
Post by allie on Jun 24, 2009 21:11:32 GMT -5
Oh my... I just came back from watching this movie called My Fake Fiancee on ABC Family. Get this. Bald Guy. Blonde Girl. Bald Guy = Ladies man, smooth, and gets on the girl's nerves quite a bit. (ZERO, GIRLFRIEND) Blonde Girl = Tempered, yet comes out open as very kind and genorous in the end. ( Tempered - ZERO, GIRLFRIEND. Kindhearted, compassionate - IT, GRADUATES, my version of Rachel in GKND/KND universes) ... OH MY GOD. XDDDD Kuki: Who are you talking to!? Nigel: Er... I--I gotta take this. ^^; *answers his cell-phone* H-hello? Oh... er, yes, Monkey? "THE MONKEY! ><" (Father's voice, by the way) Nigel: O___< Y-Yes, sir! The Monkey. Kuki: *overhearing* *screams out-loud* MONKEY!?!? You're calling Rachel 'Monkey'!?!? THAT'S SOOOO SWEET!!! ;D XD
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Jun 25, 2009 0:00:19 GMT -5
Post by CCACorn26 on Jun 25, 2009 0:00:19 GMT -5
(sweatdropping) It would seem that Nigel's having some difficulty getting through to Rachel, with Kuki cheering enthusiastically that Nigel has a pet name of sorts for Rachel. On the other hand, thoughts of revolution have been dominant in my mind over the past 12 days... and you can credit the Iranian protesters for keeping their dream alive. Knowing Nigel and Rachel, they'd probably want to take some action in leading a similar revolution of their own should a new villain arise to threaten kids, teens, and adults alike.
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Jun 25, 2009 0:27:43 GMT -5
Post by allie on Jun 25, 2009 0:27:43 GMT -5
Ee-gads, that reminds me; please don't hurt me for drawing Rachel with a new boy... He doesn't take interest him whatsoever, which is the good part of it. ;D allie-twig.deviantart.com/art/Rachel-Meets-Edward-Cullen-127145737(It's a joke; nothing serious... I would appreciate it if there were no Twilight flame wars just because of this picture. XD;; And plus... Nigel Uno is much, much, MUCH better than Edward Cullen. ) Anywho, about the "Edward Cullen imposter": Name; Donny Trates - Numbuh ((don't know yet. ^^; )) Age; 10-11 Occupation; "Right-Hand" of Numbuh Zero on Moonbase-Zero -- ... and has psychic powers from time to time. ((brought this idea up in 2006, too.)) How he got here and into the KND/TND/AND Universe- Donny is a hot-shot, and pretty jealous of a certain bald operative that has gone up into space with a certain blonde girl. He develops to train with Father, and instead of flaming abilities, he uses psychic powers from time to time. (catching adults, or...er... GIHUGIC SPOILERS: UsestoendtheKND/TND/AND/GalacticForceandputagihugicblack-outtoMoonbaseZero,andusesRachelonlyforbaittobattlewithNigeltodeterminewhotrulyisthebestoperativeontheplanet) Whew... ^^; So, it looks like a new story to develop and type after Why Can't I?. I'm looking foward to this one... Adventure, Sci-Fi, Romance... yep.
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Jun 25, 2009 7:46:10 GMT -5
Post by prettywitchiusaka on Jun 25, 2009 7:46:10 GMT -5
While I am a Twilight fan, I'm not offended in the least. I actually liked the picture to be honest with you Allie, so I don't think it will be a huge deal.
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